|Reviews for My Heart|
| affectedbyfiction chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
excellent story :)
| kitcat19us chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
| Sweet Carys chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
its really starting out well. i hope you update soon!
| Jessica chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Good start, looking forward to more, but you may want to correct your formatting, as the way you've laid the text out makes it a bit hard to read and may put other readers off. Everytime a new speaking sentence starts start a new line such as:
Harry's lips gently brushed against Severus' forehead as he said “Done.”
Severus who had tensed up when he had first started, relaxed and once again melted into Harry.
“Are… are you sure?” Severus asked with a frown.
Harry smiled gently and said “Yeah I am. I love you Severus, if I have to wait forever for you. I want you for the rest of my life. I can wait.”
Harry gently pushed Severus off him and went to his bag, coming back to the couch he took Severus into his arms again as he gave him a single sheet of paper. Severus choked in shock and said “Potter… Harry… you wrote this out?”
Harry snickered and said “Yes I did. I know how traditional you are love. Are you going to read it now?”
Severus shook his head and said “Later, I’m rather enjoying the way we are right now.”
I hope this has helped. Toodles!
| Iago96 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
| Kat1132 chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
It's really good alone too. I like this. Thanks!