Reviews for Because Sinners Deserve A Second Chance
TheCandyChild chapter 3 . 8/23/2015
...That was all unbelievable. Like, unrealistic unbelievable. C'mon, Ed could have beat the shit out of Marcus...and I thought Ed still had his alchemy?
TheCandyChild chapter 2 . 8/23/2015
Aww noooo! Dammit Winry ..
Chocolate Cupcake Lover chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Love it! :D
sweetstrawberrysmiles chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
AWWWWW! Thats sweet! :)

Well done- though I was sorta holding for a 'one year later' type thing where Ed kicks Marcus' butt with his newly restored alchemy; just alitte food for though :)
Angel21217 chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
I really, really, really, REALLY LOVE IT! It's really good. you use the name Marcus a lot. NOT LIKE THAT'S A BAD THING. I didn't mean it like a bad thing. Never mind just ignore that last comment. Sorry. but I really like it.
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 3 . 9/13/2009
nice...and you even gave winry a *full* name...

it was a good story all in all, though the twist was sort of predictable, it was still good...

i'm glad that ed and winry finally got together in the end after all that drama...

nice job with this!
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
the story's good and all but there are some things that i just got confused about...ok, not some, just one actually...

about ed's automail...

you said here that he's got it for his left arm then right leg?

umm...i'm just wondering, and i hope that you won't mind though, but can i correct you? i mean, ed's got his right arm and left leg for an automail...not the other way around...

but your story's really's pretty good up to this point...i just hope that you'd be keen enough for such details in the future...thank you...
Sakimono chapter 3 . 3/26/2008
AMAZING I SAY! How can you write so well! Is it humanly possible! ZOMG ! Please write more edWinry Fics i'm begging u! These are so good!

Saki chan
Fantasy Fan Girl chapter 3 . 1/26/2008
The ending was so good with a happy ending. (The best type of ending in my opinion) the whole story was pretty cute. Keep writing.

eds-my-buddy chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
OH THE FLUFF! This was so sad but cute, but it made me cry, but it made me laugh, but...k, i have nothing to argue with anymore, this was an awsum story. -pwned by awsumness-
Mistress Amelia chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
aw! The ending was great! I didn't see a lot of humor in it but it was still great!
dennisud chapter 3 . 6/30/2007
Aren't they gonna 'deal' with the Ass*ole couple?

oh well I would have loved to see Pinako's and Al's reactions ans well as how they got some revenge on marcus and Meg!

Atemu'sLotus chapter 3 . 6/25/2007
Very nice. Yes sinners do deserve a second chance. I enjoyed it very much! Though I did want Ed and Winry to beat up those two bozos in the very end or at least notice those two and then send a rock loose rock upon the two jerks but oh well. I wondered why she would always grab his live arm and why he would hate people with automail and then go out with Winry. Hmph..:Sends lightening bolt at them and they both die: Alright never mind problem solved.

Thanks for the enjoyable read!
Motosuwa-Hideki chapter 3 . 6/7/2007
Nicely done Just too short _
Motosuwa-Hideki chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
As much as i hate other pairings, i am GODDAMNED HAPPY xD Cz Ed decided he could move on and such (thats our Ed!Our idol) Well good job D (me no likey Marcus -.-)
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