|Reviews for Broken Wings|
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/11/2017
I have LOVED this!
| Kaidou chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
This is always such a great story, no matter how many times I've read it. Do you think you'll ever write another TB story someday? You really are good at it, and I would love to see more Abel/Esther from you. No matter how much as I like writing about them, it's always more fun to read other people's stories. :)
| Lexxxx chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
R u on of his desentants to ?
| BlueWings900 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Abelcrombie... Ambercrombie? I'm thinking about a stuffed turtle with a beard, like the one santa claus has.
loved the chapter by the way!
| Shadowmaiden3 chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
Ahhhhh! I can still review! Yahoooo!
Have I mentioned I adore your TB universe? Well, I do. Not to mention you write a fantastic Tres which gets you brownie points by the truckload (ever seen a pig fly? ever seen an android flirt? XD) it's a pity they didn't give him the ability to sweat.
You've brought me near to tears more than once, no mean feat since the last thing that made me cry was Snowbound by Fenikkusuken, though a couple of times the tears were because I was laughing so hard (Tres, always the android).
"The peanut gallery..." that line... *shakes head* genius.
| dragonprincess01 chapter 4 . 12/20/2010
I have to say I have sat here tonight and read all of this story and it has caused me to want to read more of your stories and I have subscribed to you so I can get your future posts.
Trinity Blood was and always will be my absolute favorite anime. It is the first one I have ever watched, the first manga I read and the first set of light novels (though they are still being released in the english language).
I love everything vampires...it can't be helped really, and yes Anne Rice was a obsession for awhile. Not so much now but, when I was younger yes.
Yes the Labrynth (crap its late and I can't spell sorry) reference I got right away. That is another obsession of mine from my younger days. To put it mildly I can still to this day recite most of the movie while watching it or not and it annoys most people. I know I'm weird what can I say.
Ok, anyway I have rambled on for far to long and you are probably thinking this chick it just odd. Sorry for that. If you celebrate christmas...Merry Christmas if not then Happy Holidays.
| Lalala chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
Must have sex scene. :D Not out some disgusting pleasure. Just wanted to see the rest~
Ended awsome. xD
| ObsidianEmpress chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
OMG Within Temptation? That's my #1 favorite band! I loved how you used the songs "Angels" and "Stand My Ground" from the Silent Force Album for Isabel. Perfect. And yes I agree with you that some Nightwish and Within Temptation songs scream out Abel Nightroad.
Loved that scene with Abel and Esther at the begining, beautiful use of words. But now they're MARRIED? OMG! And I learned something new about Crusniks in your last chapter: they can purr (Never considered that possiblity. (Cute!)) But when he's about to...(shudders and blushes a crimson red.) Well at least he did THAT after marrige! Thank you for implying THAT content, can't stand it when someone goes explicit (brrr!).
The Labyrinth referance is: "For my will is as strong as yours, and my kingdom is as great." and the other referance is the game of Scrabble. Man, love that movie. But I seemed to notice a few things in common with the "Teme" and Jareth the Goblin King. Both symbolize the devil in their own unique way, (Jareth tempting Sarah with her desires and wishes, Cain masqurades as an Angel when in truth he has the heart of a Devil, and he is equally as merciless as one.) and both of them are blonde bishonens with an evil, yet angelic smile. :P
And Abelcrombie and Isabel are just SOO cute. In my opinion, you did a wonderful job searing clear from the Mary Sue dom.
Overall, out of all your Milk Tea stories, this one is the best.
P.S I'd like to draw a picture of Abel-as-Prince with Esther in her ballgown and Kyrys and Isabel with Abelcrombie. But I won't publish them unless I have your permission first. My E-mail is , or if you want to catch me imeem my name is Okinawa Sama.
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
I caught that Labby quote!
| ObsidianEmpress chapter 3 . 4/2/2010
OMG all these cliffies are driving me CRAZY! Especially that last one with Abel and Esther, Love it. Hope to draw it, but with your permission first. I'm on the edge of my seat while reading this.
I loved the manga referance from volume VII its: "I am Seth! Seth I am!" She's so cute
See ya in part IV.
| ObsidianEmpress chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
I liked how you portrayed the historical Tatiana Romanov. She probably woul've felt like that after her family was slaughtered by the Bolsheveks. And Rasputin is as much asa manipulative creep and an evil royal advisor seriotype. I personally believed he caused the fall of Tsarist Russia, my opinion, don't get me started.
Heh Heh. Poor Abel can't get it through his thick featherbrained head that he is HOT! Loved that kiss scene: priceless! I agree with Abel, Seth's a terrible influance on Bell, but I think I know why, but I'm not saying it for others to figure out. Heh Heh.
But TresxAstha? Never thought of that one. But I like it. However, one thing I never knew was that Tres could dance! Well...if Data from Star Trek could dace, so can Tres :P. Heh Heh.
And that Ball gown you desinged for Esther, one word: Be-U-Ti-Ful! XD. If it's all right I wish to draw an Abel-as-Prince with Esther in that ball gown. Need your permission before I do.
And I squealed with delight as Abel danced with Esther as "Broken Wings" was playing in the background. I always wanted that to happen! .
See ya in Part I.
| ObsidianEmpress chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
His wings TWITCHED? OMG love it! Yep, he's no longer acting like a featherbrain, he's becoming one! XD.
Hmm. Abel Nightroad, Prince Artorius Elric Vradica of the Tzara Methuselute. Nice use of King Arther's Roman name and Elric of Melniborne. Who ever knew that he'd be a Prince of an Empire one day? (evil laugh) Love it!
Loved the scene when Seth heard the News about their relationship, and the look on Abel's face with the scene between Bell and Abelcrombie. LOL. I laughed so hard I was liteally rolling on the floor! Even Jedi Skysinger, Laura-chan and Naomi-chanweregoing crazy!
But that last scene where Abel and Esther were making out...(blushes up a storm.)
Love the story I'm hooked. Now I've got to finish it.
See you in Part II.
| bluea52394 chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
That was a marvelous story. *Loves it* 3 Good job~! I'd love to read more stories like this from you. I hope you keep writing! xD
| bluea52394 chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
That was fascinating. XD keep up the good work!
| bluea52394 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Very nicely done. XD I love it.