Reviews for Hell is Other People |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see Alex at school. Awesome story, eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really bad at reviewing, even though I've been following you since the beginning. I just wanted to say it's always an exciting surprise to see another chapter. This is one of my all time favorite Alex Rider fics, and Im loving the path to a happy ending. I'm particularly a fan of the Alex and Eagle friendship. I feel like we don't see it much. I've followed you over t too. I can't wait for the ending and for the rewrite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be completely honest, I didn't expect this fanfic to be as good as it was. Spent the past l few days bingeing it, and don't regret a second of it. You're amazing at writing, especially the Andrei scenes. He really felt like a genuine Alex Rider villain, he's just so easy to hate. You mentioned wanting to rewrite the first few chapters, so I'd like to suggest maybe shorten the start a little. I didn't really get into the story but a few chapters into the training camp and I was hooked. Really liked the OC's and am looking forward to seeing Chloe's return. Might be unrealistic but I really hope she and Alex can stay friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much screamflailing. Just. So much. First of all, I have to say that I just love all of your OCs? They feel like they were in canon, like real characters who belong there. It’s lovely. Also, I adore the way you’re dealing with Alex and the Mannings - he’s been through so much, and obviously there’s a lot for him to deal with before he could ever really feel like part of a family. This really just feels incredibly realistic? Also, I’m so hyped to see Chloe’s thoughts on all of this? Tbh I’ve been hoping to see them since the note and the realization her dad had that Alex was Toby, I was incredibly excited to see you were planning a bit more of her. This entire story is wonderful, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, keep up the excellent work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My goodness this is brilliant. One of if not the best fics I’ve ever read. I discovered this two days ago and I’ve done little since. Each character is so incredibly well-developed, the psychology of their motivations is devastatingly accurate (I was raised by a Gilda). I have no more words. |
![]() ![]() AHHHHHHHHHH! Omg so i i saw this screenshot on fb which said something like ‘people are so bored that i got an update on a fic that has updated since 2014’ or something and i saw that, and immediately thought of this fic. Because this has been my favourite fic for such a long time like without hesitation i was like surely HIOP? Tbh i didnt think it was gonna be updated but i thought eh id be keen for another read through anyway. AND YOU’D UPDATED! LIKE 10 CHAPTERS! You cant believe how stoked i was! I was still in high school last time i read an update and now im over a year outta uni Anyway so i freaked out and devoured it and i am still in love omg i cant really think of anything like coherent to say coz tbh im still in shock & processing lol so imma give it a couple days and read it again from the start but just a couple things that really stuck with me: I LOVE EAGLE SO MUCH. He was my fav like 6 years ago and hes still my fav now. Just the line he walks between affectionate/caring and jokey is,, so good. Hes such a babe and im so glad hes back I mean the doctors manning r also up there in spots 2 & 3 (im not counting alex) but eagles it for me. The rest of k-unit to a lesser extent as well. Speaking of the doctors manning, that little note about richard, and his possible abusive father/so far just hinted past trama :o :o :o Idk i just love this fic and all the ocs bc they all have different and distinct motivations and reasoning and reactions and theyre all well thought out in the way they react to stuff given their job/history its great AND THAT COMFORT! Me:oh nah im here for the action mostly tbh Also me, when alex started to cry n hug manning: AHHHHH! AHHHHHH! Anyway, i also went and checked out the new OG chapter on AO3 which is GREAT and fantastic and its like reading a whole new fic. Although i hope you dont change the original either, bc it was what i fell in love with initially and what kept me coming back. In fact, rereading this triggered the memory of a google doc i had where i copied and pasted my favourite quotes (and that wasn't easy as i had to do it on my phone because you cant copy things on ffn on the desktop version so i copied it on my phone and then emailed it to myself lmao), not to steal, just so i could go back and enjoy my fav lines without having to go through the doc, and anyway i went back and checked on it and it was last accessed on 3/29/16, was 4 pages long, and mostly consised of alex and eagle being soft and/or snarky. Mostly snarky. Scarily, once I started reading them again, i actually remembered most of them, which is kinda concerning lol. I actually used to think about this fic every time i would hear/read the words ‘hell is other people’, or ihop, j bc it reminded me of hiop, despite the fact i dont live anywhere near a country with ihops. So yeah, this is deffo my fav fic of all time, even now. Now its kinda close to wrapping up i sorta dont want it to end :( like when u finish a good tv show or book series lol. Its just been in my life for so long i legit would be a lil heartbroken. But thats for all your heart work, it really brought a smile to my face! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is actually for chapter 29 I just ran out of reviews for that chapter and all the other chapters up to this one Ok I’m going to make a prediction Charles is ‘friends’(loosely at most acquaintance) with Christopher, so Christopher is going to ask to come with to speak with Alex and they are going to hear the whole story like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() I live this chapter, this is the first time you really see how messed up Alex is. I can totally see this as being cannon. But don’t take my word for it. I read the books years ago and now the FanFiction is mixing up all the facts for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great overview and I get why there wasn’t a point of view for Alex. There couldn’t be with all the stuff going on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how the plans don’t perfectly line up together because of course that wouldn’t have happened |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that Charles is already involved in the conversation about Alex even with Alex infiltrating his home It just shows how amazing Alex really is I can’t wait to see how that will come into play when they see each other again( they will see each other again won’t they?) P.S i love your author notes |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can not get over the depth of this story. The way Alex is behaving and all his thoughts about Chloe. I can even feel how much he unconsciously envy’s Chloë and her dads relationship. Even though you haven’t technically written that down |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the growing changes of perspective this whole situation is having on the kids. Because they’re not going to stay the same, things are going to change. Not everyone is going to immediately know what to do and what not to do |