|Reviews for Under the Bed|
| dragoness simplicity chapter 12 . 12/6/2012
The beginnings of the story was amazing. Great plot idea.
Half way through it seemed to scitter off on a tangent, from the dream scenes I think, and the ending was quite abrupt. But I loved the hook and descriptions. Again, great idea with the bog.
| Aileil chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
| Aileil chapter 12 . 7/15/2012
I can just imagine the fish intimation Rodney must have been doing on hearing about his new neighbor. All in all I liked your story so thanks for writing it!
| Aileil chapter 9 . 7/15/2012
Some days nothing goes right at all, huh?
| Aileil chapter 8 . 7/15/2012
I liked this dream a whole ton better! The other was sort of creeping me out there. This one was...sweet. Thanks a bunch!
| fairyqueenie chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
Great story. thanks for writing. :)
| f chapter 12 . 1/24/2010
I enjoyed this fic but it seemed to lose it's way a bit in the second half and ended rather abruptly. Also, Zelenka came over as a complete prat - your "friend" is recovering from something that nearly killed him, you are supposed to be looking after his stuff but instead use the situation to humiliate him in front of the whole city. Also, Arnie, as a mechanic or engineer would be directly under McKays command, so therefore probably wouldn't antagonise him as he would know that it would result in (deserved) punishment. To McKay, Arnie wouldn't be an irritant that he could do nothing about, he would be a subordinate that he could have shipped home with a black mark on his record.
| f chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
Very good but why would Rodney say that "even Sheppard" wouldn't be able to crack the code? Surely Radek or one of the other genius scientists would be the best bet, not a pilot with a slightly above average IQ and reasonable (but not genius by a long shot) math skills?
| Joelle4 chapter 12 . 11/14/2009
Up until the works being done in the infirmary I found the story interesting, quite heavy whump but good.
Once it got there though I was disappointed. The whole part with the plumbers made close to no sense (that kind of work in an infirmary with patients in it ? I highly doubt it) and the rest of the story followed in the non-sense crack.
So good beginning but very disappointing ending.
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 12 . 10/6/2009
very very awesome
| Juniperbreezie chapter 12 . 11/23/2008
That was one hell of a funny story. I especially loved the ending. It was perfect. And OMG, the idea of Rodney having a classic porn collection was a riot.
| Silverthreads chapter 11 . 8/12/2008
Turning this into a comedy at Rodney's expense was not your best idea.
| Silverthreads chapter 8 . 8/12/2008
Hm, Sheppard's dream was dangerous while McKay's was contemplative. Interesting difference.
| Silverthreads chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
More excitement - cool!
| SaJi chapter 12 . 6/16/2008
Loved the discriptions in the earlier chapters where Rodney was trapped and such in his room and Sheppard's dream and chapter 10 was great.