Reviews for But It's Better If You Do
verbal acuity chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
So... cute. Ohmygoodness. They are adorable together.

Good job ( o )~
Mata chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
Aww...just cute! The world needs more Kiri/Hiyo love.)
oyasumiQuincy chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
that was cute..haha...hope to hear from your pair soon...*wink*
xi chi chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
That's not my favorite pairing. But They deserve a little review. ''You're the baby remember?''- My fav sentence.
Old Fiat chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Hm... In the last couple paragraphs you switch tense. But other than that, good job. :)