|Reviews for good bye and good luck|
| Refrigerator-Burn chapter 6 . 2/4/2009
hey! i love this! it is soo good! its really confusing though. your keep jumping from third person to second person! it makes my head hurt! but i cant stop reading it! its just such a good story! please update! love and support! (and wishing for a good beta!)
| Refrigerator-Burn chapter 3 . 1/16/2009
okay, im really sorry. im going to be mean. so before i get to the point- this is amazing and you better keep writing no matter what i say after this and im SO SORRY! okay, here i go:
WTF! YOU KEEP CHANGING FROM THIRD PERSON AND SECOND PERSON. AT FIST YOU SAY SHE AND THEN YOU START SAYING YOU! DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW CONFUSING THAT IS? also your spelling is so bad that my brain hurts and i have to spend time decifering it! AT LEAST SPELL IT PHONETICLY! thats what i do like for decifering and phonetically! AT LEAST PEOPLE U.N.D.E.R.S.T.A.N.D! this is atrocious! great content but your teachers must ne in HELL! for gods sake(no offense to you religious..i wont say freaks but really intense people) USE SPELL CHECK! IF F*ING BUILT INTO THE FREAKING COMPUTER! PLEASE TAKE PITY AND FIX THIS! also the reason you are not getting alot of people offering to beta for you is because your spelling and grammar is so bad THAT NO ONE UNDERSTANDS WHAT YOUR SAYING! thats a bit of an exaggeration but seriously please work on this.
SORRY AGAIN I REALLY LOVE EVERYTHING YOU WRITE BUT ITS KINDA ANNOYING HAVING TO GUESS WHAT YOU MEAN! SORRY PLEASE DONT TAKE THIS TO HARSHLY!
| xYuna chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
| xYuna chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
| xYuna chapter 3 . 5/27/2007
like it so far:) update asap!
| KurenaiYuuki chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
i love this story so far please update again soon i really like i don't see to many crossovers in the oban area.