|Reviews for The Sand Village Gets it Gully|
| AliciaSpinnet93 chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
"Yeah sands up leaves down". LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO ! OMG OMG OMG! Okay I'm calm now. I have never seen this show in my life yet when I read this, I laughed like a mongoose. The End.
| 12343221 chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
XD OMFG! That was great... G-money... XD LOL! I love this. Update soon.
| symbiotic chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
It's a good idea but it was definetely not carried out right. To really make this work, you should have created an alternative universe to go with the gangster language, such as an urban enviroment. Just making the Naruto characters speak it randomly doesn't really work out.
This isn't a flame, it's constructive critism. You want to take it as a flame, that's fine, but I didn't mean it as a flame. It's meant to give you a better idea at taking this from. You don't want to take it, that's fine. But it's what I think.