Reviews for Fínvienyarna
Gracie Pearl chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
What elves need: Swords, bureaucracy, and pretty hair. Those Minyar maybe should have taken up the mutual grooming as well as the Nelyar. (You know, since almost all of their named members are already born.)
fantasychica37 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Words cannot describe how much I love this. Finbereth- I died.
Athalanta chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Giggles abound.

Thanks for the story!
Erwen Brogiel chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Oh my, this is hilarious. My favourite parts: the conflict between lispers and anti-lispers, the general uselessness of the Minyar, the reference to the duodecimal system... and basically everything else. You should write more funny stories like this one.
FireFly07 chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Oh wow! That was rich! Awesome work~ "You boil on a warg's behind!" Hahahah! Also, the reference to their duodecimal system is amazing. :D Cute! I also love how they keep asking "What is _?" XD
Lalaeth chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
This is wonderful. It's easy to imagine it being read by Stephen Fry.
zedille chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Ha! Ha! Ha! very amusing, I liked it a lot...

But I thought the first word was "el" or something...

oh well, it's a parody.
Violin Ghost chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
It's a wonder Tolkien's spirit isn't hunting you down.

That was hilarious- excellent job. The way you played with the idea of elves being vain was really just too funny.

More, more!

Violin Ghost
Lamiel chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
This made me laugh out loud. Particularly the line about the parchment, "Ingwë conceded that the Tatyar had not yet invented writing." That struck me as hilarious.

Brilliant work. Thank you.
6336 chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Oh,oh,oh, (Stops to wipe tea off screen!). I love it, just the sort of thing I could see 'challanged' Elves coming up with!(Or very tongue in cheek Elves).More please,

lilith chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
very funny, i like it very much
Ceana chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
What a delightful and funny look at the First Born. I dare say even Tolkien would have enjoyed it.

Well done!
CAH chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Excellent! Funny and had me in stitches!
AC2 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Titter! Much AU fun! I like it. Actually, it reminds me of the silly myths and legends of Europe. The Giant's Causeway? The result of a scrap between Finn Mc Cool and another giant. If Tolkien can give us Bombadil, you can give us the Tatyarin language-making committee.
Fraulein Chacha chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
That was awesome! Swords are "useful" indeed...
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