Reviews for In Wrong Place in the Wrong Time
Guest chapter 3 . 6/29/2017
aw. I want to know what he was going to say
GeekMom13 chapter 2 . 6/29/2017
great start, cute so far
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 24 . 3/31/2016
Great story!
TheLittleRoguex chapter 3 . 7/16/2015
Honestly don't you two read chapter 24 . 5/14/2015
I am dissapointed with the ending, seemed strange and rushed. Also time had already changed a lot with Hermione being captured, so why not expose Peter and change time All together and safe James and lily.

Otherwise a fun story with drama
Everliah chapter 24 . 3/17/2015
you killed james
how could you kill jAMES?
i was so complete and then you kILLE JAMES!

Apart from that, I love this! It's a little rushed, I guess but that's not a bad thing! It's just because I have a love for extreemeeeellyyyy looonngggg stories! ;)
But seriously this had all my favourite things in! Marauders, Hermione, Tom Riddle and Hogwarts! Perfecto!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Can I ask how everybody expected Ron Weasley to be Head Boy? I mean, Harry or even Draco would've been better.
MysticalPatronuses chapter 2 . 8/16/2014
1977 is the seventh year if school for the marauders and lily... Not 1981 is the year they died
Guest chapter 24 . 2/15/2014
I was enjoying the story very much I quite enjoy these kind of stories but what really turned me off from the story was riddle manor it went on and on and on and i'm afraid that if there is a sequel I won't be reading it...sorry
TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 24 . 1/13/2014
Really? :P Ugh. And it coulda been so much more...
TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 23 . 1/13/2014
Interesting twists... So much compromisation of the past though... Could have deadly after-effects. Oblivate mighta been better for them, lol. Teenagers...
TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 15 . 1/13/2014
Dis-orienting formatting that has all the paragraphs almost run together... Find a beta?
TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 14 . 1/13/2014
It would logically be impossible for Remus to keep his mind as the wolf and behave as you have him here, especially without the Wolfsbane [it wasn't even invented yet, much less distributed by a sorrowful snape]... which is off-putting, as is the unexplained phenomenon of Voldemort knowing she's from the future [i don't see a way his minions could've found out to report to him, and it wasn't explained]... But otherwise impelled to find out how this turns out. Even if i skip chapters. Decent writing quality anyway and interesting
TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 5 . 1/12/2014
I'm not overly pleased with Snape's behavior.. he's my favorite character, but otherwise, good story so far
hannah.kaho chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
that's not possible that's the year that Voldemort killed Harry's parents it would have to be 1977 or 1978 because that was their last year at hogwarts
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