I read this thing a lot of times man and I just gotta tell you I love the story man Just tell me one thing when are you gonna continue it again

I Corinthians 6:1-11 NKJV

[1] Dare any of you, having a matter against another, go to law before the unrighteous, and not before the saints? [2] Do you not know that the saints will judge the world? And if the world will be judged by you, are you unworthy to judge the smallest matters? [3] Do you not know that we shall judge angels? How much more, things that pertain to this life? [4] If then you have judgments concerning things pertaining to this life, do you appoint those who are least esteemed by the church to judge? [5] I say this to your shame. Is it so, that there is not a wise man among you, not even one, who will be able to judge between his brethren? [6] But brother goes to law against brother, and that before unbelievers! [7] Now therefore, it is already an utter failure for you that you go to law against one another. Why do you not rather accept wrong? Why do you not rather let yourselves be cheated? [8] No, you yourselves do wrong and cheat, and you do these things to your brethren! [9] Do you not know that the unrighteous will not inherit the kingdom of God? Do not be deceived. Neither fornicators, nor idolaters, nor adulterers, nor homosexuals, nor sodomites, [10] nor thieves, nor covetous, nor drunkards, nor revilers, nor extortioners will inherit the kingdom of God. [11] And such were some of you. But you were washed, but you were sanctified, but you were justified in the name of the Lord Jesus and by the Spirit of our God.

/bible/114/1co.6. 23:1-56 NKJV
[1] Then the whole multitude of them arose and led Him to Pilate. [2] And they began to accuse Him, saying, “We found this fellow perverting the nation, and forbidding to pay taxes to Caesar, saying that He Himself is Christ, a King.” [3] Then Pilate asked Him, saying, “Are You the King of the Jews?” He answered him and said, “It is as you say.” [4] So Pilate said to the chief priests and the crowd, “I find no fault in this Man.” [5] But they were the more fierce, saying, “He stirs up the people, teaching throughout all Judea, beginning from Galilee to this place.” [6] When Pilate heard of Galilee, he asked if the Man were a Galilean. [7] And as soon as he knew that He belonged to Herod’s jurisdiction, he sent Him to Herod, who was also in Jerusalem at that time. [8] Now when Herod saw Jesus, he was exceedingly glad; for he had desired for a long time to see Him, because he had heard many things about Him, and he hoped to see some miracle done by Him. [9] Then he questioned Him with many words, but He answered him nothing. [10] And the chief priests and scribes stood and vehemently accused Him. [11] Then Herod, with his men of war, treated Him with contempt and mocked Him, arrayed Him in a gorgeous robe, and sent Him back to Pilate. [12] That very day Pilate and Herod became friends with each other, for previously they had been at enmity with each other. [13] Then Pilate, when he had called together the chief priests, the rulers, and the people, [14] said to them, “You have brought this Man to me, as one who misleads the people. And indeed, having examined Him in your presence, I have found no fault in this Man concerning those things of which you accuse Him; [15] no, neither did Herod, for I sent you back to him; and indeed nothing deserving of death has been done by Him. [16] I will therefore chastise Him and release Him” [17] (for it was necessary for him to release one to them at the feast). [18] And they all cried out at once, saying, “Away with this Man, and release to us Barabbas”— [19] who had been thrown into prison for a certain rebellion made in the city, and for murder. [20] Pilate, therefore, wishing to release Jesus, again called out to them. [21] But they shouted, saying, “Crucify Him, crucify Him!” [22] Then he said to them the third time, “Why, what evil has He done? I have found no reason for death in Him. I will therefore chastise Him and let Him go.” [23] But they were insistent, demanding with loud voices that He be crucified. And the voices of these men and of the chief priests prevailed. [24] So Pilate gave sentence that it should be as they requested. [25] And he released to them the one they requested, who for rebellion and murder had been thrown into prison; but he delivered Jesus to their will. [26] Now as they led Him away, they laid hold of a certain man, Simon a Cyrenian, who was coming from the country, and on him they laid the cross that he might bear it after Jesus. [27] And a great multitude of the people followed Him, and women who also mourned and lamented Him. [28] But Jesus, turning to them, said, “Daughters of Jerusalem, do not weep for Me, but weep for yourselves and for your children. [29] For indeed the days are coming in which they will say, ‘Blessed are the barren, wombs that never bore, and breasts which never nursed!’ [30] Then they will begin ‘to say to the mountains, “Fall on us!” and to the hills, “Cover us!” ’ [31] For if they do these things in the green wood, what will be done in the dry?” [32] There were also two others, criminals, led with Him to be put to death. [33] And when they had come to the place called Calvary, there they crucified Him, and the criminals, one on the right hand and the other on the left. [34] Then Jesus said, “Father, forgive them, for they do not know what they do.” And they divided His garments and cast lots. [35] And the people stood looking on. But even the rulers with them sneered, saying, “He saved others; let Him save Himself if He is the Christ, the chosen of God.” [36] The soldiers also mocked Him, coming and offering Him sour wine, [37] and saying, “If You are the King of the Jews, save Yourself.” [38] And an inscription also was written over Him in letters of Greek, Latin, and Hebrew: THIS IS THE KING OF THE JEWS. [39] Then one of the criminals who were hanged blasphemed Him, saying, “If You are the Christ, save Yourself and us.” [40] But the other, answering, rebuked him, saying, “Do you not even fear God, seeing you are under the same condemnation? [41] And we indeed justly, for we receive the due reward of our deeds; but this Man has done nothing wrong.” [42] Then he said to Jesus, “Lord, remember me when You come into Your kingdom.” [43] And Jesus said to him, “Assuredly, I say to you, today you will be with Me in Paradise.” [44] Now it was about the sixth hour, and there was darkness over all the earth until the ninth hour. [45] Then the sun was darkened, and the veil of the temple was torn in two. [46] And when Jesus had cried out with a loud voice, He said, “Father, ‘into Your hands I commit My spirit.’ ” Having said this, He breathed His last. [47] So when the centurion saw what had happened, he glorified God, saying, “Certainly this was a righteous Man!” [48] And the whole crowd who came together to that sight, seeing what had been done, beat their breasts and returned. [49] But all His acquaintances, and the women who followed Him from Galilee, stood at a distance, watching these things. [50] Now behold, there was a man named Joseph, a council member, a good and just man. [51] He had not consented to their decision and deed. He was from Arimathea, a city of the Jews, who himself was also waiting for the kingdom of God. [52] This man went to Pilate and asked for the body of Jesus. [53] Then he took it down, wrapped it in linen, and laid it in a tomb that was hewn out of the rock, where no one had ever lain before. [54] That day was the Preparation, and the Sabbath drew near. [55] And the women who had come with Him from Galilee followed after, and they observed the tomb and how His body was laid. [56] Then they returned and prepared spices and fragrant oils. And they rested on the Sabbath according to the commandment.

/bible/114/luk.23.

Revelation 21:1-8 NKJV
[1] Now I saw a new heaven and a new earth, for the first heaven and the first earth had passed away. Also there was no more sea. [2] Then I, John, saw the holy city, New Jerusalem, coming down out of heaven from God, prepared as a bride adorned for her husband. [3] And I heard a loud voice from heaven saying, “Behold, the tabernacle of God is with men, and He will dwell with them, and they shall be His people. God Himself will be with them and be their God. [4] And God will wipe away every tear from their eyes; there shall be no more death, nor sorrow, nor crying. There shall be no more pain, for the former things have passed away.” [5] Then He who sat on the throne said, “Behold, I make all things new.” And He said to me, “Write, for these words are true and faithful.” [6] And He said to me, “It is done! I am the Alpha and the Omega, the Beginning and the End. I will give of the fountain of the water of life freely to him who thirsts. [7] He who overcomes shall inherit all things, and I will be his God and he shall be My son. [8] But the cowardly, unbelieving, abominable, murderers, sexually immoral, sorcerers, idolaters, and all liars shall have their part in the lake which burns with fire and brimstone, which is the second death.”

/bible/114/rev.21.

Ngl, this seems to be going in the direction of a cuck fic

The sequel ?

You are right about war and the whole Disney ending thing. And truthfully it would be a miracle for someone to save him after that beheading. But that doesn’t excuse you Killing Chouji. I know that I and many others have gotten at you for this and that it has change nothing, and will change nothing. But I can’t just let it go. Especially with the death of Asuma, you gave that character a chance at redeeming himself. There are two people in my opinion that could have and should have died instead of Chouji, with the way that you have written them.

I wish that you would edit things by giving us a real chapter here after so long. Because I will never count this as an actual chapter. The way that fan fiction does.

I am not much of a Young Sakura fan. I get why she ended up putting a target on both Naruto and Hinata, unfortunately Hinata. She thought that she was about to die so it makes sense but the only one that deserves that sort of treatment were the ones that did what they did to Sakura.

It has been awhile since you have updated this story in any fashion. I do hope that everything is alright. Would love to see an update even if is just a chapter being edited. So long as it was clear that, that is what actually took place.

Thank you Thank you Thank you. That was the one thing that was pissing me off the most in this story. Sakura once again skates free for doing the things in the worst possible way imaginable simply because she was a lovesick little fool of a child. The problem with that ideology is she was raised from a very young age to know exactly what treason is and so surely knew she was committing it against her home village when she followed the instructions Sasuke gave her in the missive, he sent her. Not even for a second did she stop and consider how he was able to even send her that missive without it being intercepted. For the possibly smartest girl in her age group, she displayed remarkable stupidity in this incident. She knew for a fact Sasuke had abandoned the village and sided with their enemies. She knew for a fact she was required by village law to turn over any communication she might receive from him to higher authorities as they knew much better than she a (12, 13) year old girl might know the games a recent traitor might try to employ. But she ignored it all and skated free with no punishment because Tsunade saw herself in Sakura. Other than the normal reasonable trauma related to what had happened to her during her time with Sasuke and his Otanin(don't remember how to spell this right now. Too drunk.) compatriots, she truly did receive no punishment for her attempted abandonment and betrayal of her comrades. Everyone seemed to overlook the fact that Ino, Hinata and the other girls are only recognized potential victims because Sakura told Sasuke they were important to Naruto who he, Sasuke, sees as his number one enemy even if he thinks his true enemy is Itachi. Truth is for Sasuke the number one enemy is Naruto. Itachi is number 2. Sasuke truly believes he needs to kill Naruto.

Naruto x yugito is better than Naruto x hinata.

Hinata has nothing in common with naruto

Not EXACTLY sure how the Uchiha could be considered "nobility" ANYWAY... The leaf was founded by an idiot that turned around and tried to destroy it, almost as soon as he helped FORM it.. Because nobody wanted him to rule it!... That sounds like a whiny child... Not a "noble leader". There has NEVER been a diamyo OR hokage from the uchiha clan... NOT ONE.. Soooo.. How exactly does ANYBODY consider them "nobility" in the first place? Their eyes? Well considering all one has to do to get those eyes is just TAKE them from someone that has em'... Um.. Doesn't seem very "noble" there either. Considering they work perfectly fine for ANYBODY that just "nabs them up" (plus the people seem to INSTANTLY know what they can do and use them for those purposes) ... Are EASY to exchange around between any/everyone AND the uchiha don't regenerate them... Doesn't seem like much of a "bloodline". Add in all the DOWNSIDES to trying to "level them up" and the ATROCIOUS ways they do... And well.. The "pink eye" REALLY doesn't seem like a bloodline OR an inborn power as much as it just looks like a "BAD WRITING DEVICE". Or AT BEST.. A "virus" because the sharringan REALLY IS able to be "spread" to ANYONE AT ALL...

You know, I've never heard in ANY of the data books that Asuma was SUCH A DRUNK! Kurenai has a drinking problem (at least according to canon) but Asuma never did. All I can say, is you REALLY seem to dislike the character of Asuma and it shows... But Oh well.

Danzo with the sharringan was kinda an obvious move.. EVERY villain gets the sharringan AT SOME POINT... It's almost a requirement... Also, it seems DISTURBINGLY easy to just "hot swap" eyeballs in this series doesn't it?.. This supposedly "great and powerful bloodline" seems about as difficult to acquire as a pokemon card. Don't need medics or risky procedures.. Or EVEN OPERATING ROOMS... NOPE just grab em' and stuff em' in the eye sockets... They just start working. That seems a LITTLE SUS to me. Seems funny in boruto they just got RID of the whole damn mechanic and gave people "cyber eyes" which DOES EVERYTHING A SHARRINGAN, M. SHARRINGAN AND BYAKKGUAN can do, all rolled into one and that dozens can have at any time... Well so much for the "great and powerful abilities, done through meticulous bloodline breeding". Also do you ever find it ODD... That naruto ALWAYS NEEDS ALL THIS STUPID "training", but Obitdo, Nageto, sasuke and Itachi NEVER need to train in ANYTHING, they just spontaneously develop powers and INSTANTLY know entire suites of uses for them. That seems like very shoddy writing.

"Kakashi only hoped that Naruto would be far more understanding with him, than he had ever been with Naruto" yes, I have noticed that a major failing of the series; is that the adults expect the CHILDREN to be FAR MORE ADULT then they, themselves are. I look at some of the characters like: Hiruzen, Danzo, Horuma, Koharu and a few others and the only thing that springs to mind is.. "HOW HAVE YOU LIVED THIS LONG?!"? Then with people like kakashi, Mizuki and quite a few others?.. "HOW ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO BE YOUR RANK?" Case in point for kakashi, not only NOT noticing WHO naruto is... But also he fought and LOST to zabuzza.. Kakashi is a LIGHTNING ninja.. He fought a guy STANDING ON A LAKE, who was soaking wet and who was holding a HUGE IRON ROD! How does ANYBODY lose in that situation?

You know, there is "caring for your comrades and teammates" and then there is "being stupid when your FORMER teammates are TRYING TO KILL YOU!"... Or "putting DOWN a 'mad dog' when it goes rabid". I still don't understand where all this CARING AND CONCERN stem from... They BARELY INTERACTED and NONE of it was good. But then again I'm not REALLY clear on how a team is supposed to create SPONTANEOUS "teamwork" after being formed, in under a hour, when they've been taught for YEARS to be in COMPETITION with each other.
In the long term, the ninja teams are a GREAT IDEA, they work in a LOT of genres, it's a very tried and true setup.. But in the short term?...The way this series SETS UP the teams? Just DOES NOT COMPUTE. It's very "forced" and not very believable.

I don't think Kakashi failed ALL his "students" (term used VERY LOOSELY here), because with sasuke an old addage comes to mind.. "you can't fix stupid"... Well you can't really fix "evil" either.. If anything Kakashi was TOO GOOD an instructor to the uchiha.. If he taught him LESS, then orochimaru wouldn't have thought sasuke was WORTH going after.. The uchiha was ALWAYS going to go down the route he went down... You could tell that from the jump... ANYONE could tell that from the jump... He probably shouldn't have been put in the shinobi corps to begin with... Instead, spent several years in a nice "white room"... All-in-all there are several things that COULD have been done different, but it boils down to, it was a BAD MATCH UP.. Those three had NO BUSINESS being on the same team together and with THAT sensei... One does not add gasoline to a fire, lace a stick of dynamite, or combine batteries and bonfires... There are just some things you DO NOT mix.. You'd THINK after minato's team, Jiriaya's team AND the sannin that the Leaf would KNOW what to look for, in order to AVOID these problems... But they NEVER SEEM TO LEARN!

You know, I like that whole statement of the "regulations being dropped, to make more chunnin".. It EXPLAINS Mizuki, something I've never seen a FF do before.

So the NARA, The clan of INTELLIGENCE... Couldn't figure out the difference between a kunai and a scroll? PLUS couldn't tell who naruto's parents were? Despite his last name, clan symbol made on ALL his clothes, verbal tic of Kushina and him being a MIRROR IMAGE of Minato that they ALL grew up with? ... *blinks*.. Um.. "logic error". I also find a bit of "logical disconnect" because they (and all the other clan heads) would have known KUSHINA for years.. And SHE WAS THE PREVIOUS JINCHURIKI of the same being, they all have lost their minds over, with trying to BREAK THE "PRISON" of!

"it was a mistake Shikamaru"... A...Mistake?... No it wasn't A (as in single) mistake, it was 4 mistakes made on the day and then 3 REPEATED every single day for 12 years!.. I can't even tell how MANY mistakes that adds up to. I'm not sure just saying "kages are human".. Is QUITE ENOUGH... Anybody can SEE the blunders THAT WOULD happen. But then to let it continue? No, most definitely not a "it was a human mistake".