Reviews for Initial Offensive
AthenaSmile chapter 6 . 8/23
Idk. From reading the prequels, I had thought you were the well-paced, no BS type. This one seems to have a lot of fillers in between. Or maybe it's cause the others are oneshots? Really Idk. I'd most prolly go back once/if (you did say that you could leave it hanging depending on the readers) it is finished.
TheNightstriker chapter 6 . 8/15
Dense as f***. Ughhh what are we gonna do with you Naruto *facepalm*
Jani.Beccharelli chapter 6 . 12/24/2014
Would love to see you continue this story!
startailsbomber chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
This still going? Love to see it go on!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22/2014
What happens next? And you said it wouldn't be that long.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
Awesome story pleas update
TheQuasiZillionaire chapter 6 . 4/25/2013
Oh noes... It can't end there... ;_;

But seriously, awesome work. A shame it isn't finished.
Ryu Senju Uchiha chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Awesome story pleas update more :)
serenitydc chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
"but why does he have to be such a nice guy? Asshole." That one line made me laugh so hard.
VictoryPeace chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
Hey, why did you never continue to update? Its a very good story.
Lucifer chapter 6 . 5/24/2012
Dope story! UPDATE UNLESS U WANT 2 DIE! Lol!
fAteD lOvE chapter 6 . 7/9/2011
Hahaha entertaining read. Wish you'd update this :)
aar60493 chapter 6 . 6/28/2011
more please
Akiri chapter 6 . 2/14/2011
I feel a little bad for Naruto. He's getting caught up in a cat fight. I like the Ino pairing. Naruto needs some .
Shiso no Kitsune chapter 6 . 1/23/2011
OK, first things first. This is a great naruto fanfic that has no problems with grasping the humanity of the characters and the drama that their interactions cause each other.

Secondly: You sir, are a fiend. I stumble across one of the decent NaruIno fics just to find that it's not finished and hasn't been updated in FOUR YEARS! Wasted potential if you ask me, if you just leave it hanging like a dick in the breeze.
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