|Reviews for Initial Offensive|
| shade chapter 6 . 9/25
won't take long huh? shame about that, I was really looking forward to see how this turned out. ti was an awesome fanfiction by the way.
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/1/2016
One of the better fic's on this site. But when are goin to update...you just gave your story a bad case of blue balls!
| AthenaSmile chapter 6 . 8/23/2015
Idk. From reading the prequels, I had thought you were the well-paced, no BS type. This one seems to have a lot of fillers in between. Or maybe it's cause the others are oneshots? Really Idk. I'd most prolly go back once/if (you did say that you could leave it hanging depending on the readers) it is finished.
| TheNightstriker chapter 6 . 8/15/2015
Dense as f***. Ughhh what are we gonna do with you Naruto *facepalm*
| Jani.Beccharelli chapter 6 . 12/24/2014
Would love to see you continue this story!
| startailsbomber chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
This still going? Love to see it go on!
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/22/2014
What happens next? And you said it wouldn't be that long.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
Awesome story pleas update
| Quazillionaire chapter 6 . 4/25/2013
Oh noes... It can't end there... ;_;
But seriously, awesome work. A shame it isn't finished.
| Ryu Senju Uchiha chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Awesome story pleas update more :)
| serenitydc chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
"but why does he have to be such a nice guy? Asshole." That one line made me laugh so hard.
| VictoryPeace chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
Hey, why did you never continue to update? Its a very good story.
| Lucifer chapter 6 . 5/24/2012
Dope story! UPDATE UNLESS U WANT 2 DIE! Lol!
| fAteD lOvE chapter 6 . 7/9/2011
Hahaha entertaining read. Wish you'd update this :)
| aar60493 chapter 6 . 6/28/2011