This is wonderful! I really liked how the characterizations of everyone around Toph made it so that your story matched up with the TV show. Yama's death was very sad. You also did a good job making her parents three dimensional.

epicness

Even thought I am only reading this story now I have to admot it is an amazing story I honestly think its one of the best Toph story ever :)

This was a great story. We never got to learn too many details about Toph's background, and you did a great job at filling in the gaps. One of my absolute favorite ATLA stories.

*claps* Flameo hotman...Flameo...
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This is such a good fic:D

Aang!

This is epic. Toph is epic:D

This rocksXD

Thank you. It was a good backstory.

Lovely. :,)

Wow . . . I have spent the past hour or so reading this, and I have to tell you, I enjoyed the experience immensely. Your story is really good. I loved everything about it; Toph's inner thoughts concerning her father, her relationship with her mother at a young age, her friendship with Yama, how she practiced Earthbending every night, her creativity with how she practiced and grew, everything. Also, everyone was perfectly in character, so EXCELLENT job with that. This story deserves more attention. :) Again, wonderful job, and thank you for taking the time to write this fic! It's amazing.
MidnightRain

A very good read. You portrayed Toph well, and your style was great (and it's always nice to read a story by someone who knows English). Bravo.

This is a very cute and very Toph fic.

PLEASE CONTINUE!