|Reviews for Shrouded in Darkness|
| SapphireSecret chapter 25 . 2/25
This is wonderful! I really liked how the characterizations of everyone around Toph made it so that your story matched up with the TV show. Yama's death was very sad. You also did a good job making her parents three dimensional.
| bongo chapter 18 . 1/3
| Alex chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Even thought I am only reading this story now I have to admot it is an amazing story I honestly think its one of the best Toph story ever :)
| Isil'zha BLZ chapter 25 . 12/24/2013
This was a great story. We never got to learn too many details about Toph's background, and you did a great job at filling in the gaps. One of my absolute favorite ATLA stories.
| Zelda rules chapter 25 . 11/23/2013
*claps* Flameo hotman...Flameo...
| Zelda rules chapter 24 . 11/23/2013
This is such a good fic:D
| Zelda rules chapter 18 . 11/23/2013
| Zelda rules chapter 17 . 11/23/2013
This is epic. Toph is epic:D
| Zelda rules chapter 7 . 11/23/2013
| lemon-rind chapter 25 . 10/17/2013
Thank you. It was a good backstory.
| Digi-fanCapp chapter 25 . 9/30/2013
| LandofMidnightRain chapter 25 . 8/21/2013
Wow . . . I have spent the past hour or so reading this, and I have to tell you, I enjoyed the experience immensely. Your story is really good. I loved everything about it; Toph's inner thoughts concerning her father, her relationship with her mother at a young age, her friendship with Yama, how she practiced Earthbending every night, her creativity with how she practiced and grew, everything. Also, everyone was perfectly in character, so EXCELLENT job with that. This story deserves more attention. :) Again, wonderful job, and thank you for taking the time to write this fic! It's amazing.
| V. Z chapter 25 . 7/7/2013
A very good read. You portrayed Toph well, and your style was great (and it's always nice to read a story by someone who knows English). Bravo.
| StrangePointOfView chapter 25 . 5/22/2013
This is a very cute and very Toph fic.
| TophFan chapter 25 . 3/10/2013