Great fic! I have to admit, I didn’t believe I was going to like it at first, since it’s not what I usually read, but your insight into Toph’s character was very well done!

Love the story

You made me tear up at that beautiful letter! Such a wonderful story.

No! I loved the friendship between Toph and Yama. May Yama rest in peace.

/ cries
This fic was just beautiful! Toph's characterization is spot on.
Toph is one of my favorite characters, and you really did her justice. Kudos to you!

What an incredibly verbose 6-year-old...seriously though, so far this is pretty great writing.

Love the story! Please update soon, now following!

So nice, having TVTropes recommendations to help sift through the 90% of all fanfic that's garbage to find that 10% that's amazing- and this fic certainly deserves its recommendation! While not a particularly long or super-intense read, you've totally nailed Toph's character and I really like the new angle and slight expansion on the canon material; your version of her meeting the gang and running away meshes beautifully with the canon.

I can't begin to imagine how awkward it was trying to narrate the setting as Toph understands it, minus the usual descriptors of expression, color, light, or shadow and instead having to try and describe what is basically a totally alien way of looking at one's surrounding. But dang, you definitely pulled it off!

All in all, a very enjoyable read, I may just need to go check out some of your other stories sometime. :D

That was an amazing fanfic. I've always been interested in Tophs life before she joined Aang. Also: HAWKEY YAY

I love this...so much... :')

:')

Aww

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:D

This is wonderful! I really liked how the characterizations of everyone around Toph made it so that your story matched up with the TV show. Yama's death was very sad. You also did a good job making her parents three dimensional.