|Reviews for Naruto 40,000|
| mamert chapter 3 . 9/26/2016
Kakashi was "pumping fireballs"? If intent on heavy resource expenditure, I thought he'd uncover his eye for some guaranteed crits with the very accurate weapon he was given.
I do, however, see how the simple, brutish charge could leave little for Shikamaru to work with.
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Please something with Space Wolves :)
13th Company HURAH!
| marissafish chapter 17 . 6/4/2010
As an actual fan of both series, I have to say, how dare you. You have bastardized one of the greatest sci-fi series for no fathomable reason. There is no reason for a Chaos Marine would die because they could easily take a tank and punch a hole into it let alone three ninjas. A commissar would of executed the ninjas on sight and been on his merry way. If the Commissar noticed what the ninjas were doing then the nin would be labeled chaos infused, heretics, or if they were lucky then they would only be sent off to the black ships on the offchance they were psykers. Commissars don't hand out metals and would think something's wrong if four civilians were doing more damage than a tank... No self respecting Space Marine chapter would ever name themsleves after any Imperial Guard regiment and the Chapters were formed before or right after the Horus Heresy. Do your research and stop killing WH40K.
| NewFLavor4UrEars chapter 17 . 1/22/2009
hey ur story is rele good i luvs it! the only thing i disagree with is that it took, Itachi, Kisame AND Sasuke to kill the Chaos marine. i noe that the marine was a general and all, but still, he isnt THAT invincible. Kisame should have been able to dispatch him with ease. he could have simply flooded the area and drowned the marine or sent in those sharks. but that is my only complaint keep up the good work!
| eternal-uchiha chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
| shadowcrow10 chapter 8 . 4/3/2008
Ya should've made it a Tyranid
| Follower of Light chapter 16 . 3/24/2008
I really liked it. update soon
| Rimshooter chapter 16 . 2/1/2008
kaeldrake is pain in the ass aint he?
| Rimshooter chapter 13 . 2/1/2008
Uh oh, Gasler turned into a necron lord!
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 16 . 1/8/2008
Well i love both Naruto and 40k and am glad to see more crossovers of the two on the rise. Kudos on your new models hope they yurned out ok. How does a Tau based Naruto crossover sound to you hm? Just an idea i been kicking around.
| ApocSM chapter 16 . 11/27/2007
Love the story, update soon!
| SPECIALGUY chapter 13 . 11/5/2007
ch 13 CHAPLAINS ARE NOT PSYKERS THEY CANNOT USE FORCE WEAPONS. Go get some codex for w40k then read through rules list. I don't mean to be a bother but please try and pay a little attention to detail.
| SPECIALGUY chapter 10 . 11/5/2007
Kisame is so much stronger than a chaos marine. Physically he is nearly unbeatable strength wise even Lee doesn't come close and he can fight a 3 tailed Naruto with 1/3 of his chakra don't make me laugh if naruto can beat out a gun he at least should use his pinky to to maul a chaos marines face. You also speak as if people throw around jutsu like nothing. 6-8 High class techniques wear Kakashi out while he uses his Sharingan. Naruto is one of the few exceptions so don't think everyone can do the stuff he can it just isn't feasable. I'm not saying that you can't throw the levels around just try to proportion the strength of the characters better especially if your ganking out the Naruto Characters. Chaos Lords tend to be thousands of years old expierience wise as well so no one lives that long being an idiot screaming BLOOD ORGIE.
| SPECIALGUY chapter 9 . 11/5/2007
For chapter eight you refer to the weapon bolter rifle. There is no such thing. A bolter is already massive rifle a bolt pistol is smaller form and heavy bolters are usually mounted weapons.
| Ravenor chapter 14 . 10/27/2007
You seem to still under estimate a Chaos Space marines he screamed getting hit by a ball of flame your talking about a being thats more than human.A regular SM got his arm hit by a Necron Flayer and he didnt even grunt he just kept first punch also you captured quite well since it was a wild punch and only slightly the second punch WOULD have ruptured all his internal organs and shattered his should have killed him why doesnt the Lord have any spiciel Swords,Axes,Reapers or anything else it makes him see dull.I did like the part it melted his fix up the 40k characters you seem to under estimate them.