|Reviews for Undecided|
| jk chapter 4 . 8/2
bella begging for forgiveness is her "request" that he leave? that's how he will take it? god hes a fucking idiot
| twilight-issues chapter 10 . 11/11/2008
um. yeah you really need to get going on this story. OR YOU WILL BE GROUNDED! AND NO IMAGINARY DESSERT FOR YOU! HAHAHAHA! LOL. jk. but yeah i know i'm a little late and all, but this is a really good story. you should have Bella give Jake a chance. i think that would add a really good twist to things. i dont have a home page or anything like that. i dont even write fanfics. but if some how you can get my e-mail from this letter, i wouldn't mind being your loving beta or something like that! ;) lol. but if you cant just in your next AN put my name down so that i know you got this.
THANKS! and i WILL be waiting for my cookies!
| TwiAniJayFan chapter 10 . 7/27/2008
I really like this idea and your story
| Smilley76 chapter 10 . 4/4/2008
Hurry and update i wana know what happens!
| buccaneergirl12 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
I love it!
| Vampireme chapter 10 . 12/23/2007
Bella needs to be a vamp.
| Leria chapter 10 . 10/24/2007
Hmm..i really can't decide if I am cheering for Jacob or wishing for Edward to come back. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Blood Filled Tears chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
This is really good! I like it alot! please continue!
| marina916 chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
i like this story update soon
| eclipsed heart chapter 10 . 8/17/2007
oh, i get it! i hope u update soon!
| La Belle Brunette chapter 10 . 8/1/2007
can i be the 100th reviwer? please please please? i just read this story today...so how about it? lol ;)
i really like this one, and i love the edward POV's.
| bent05 chapter 10 . 7/21/2007
love the story. I think I have an idea, if you want it to be a jacob story or just a no edward story. Well you have the Voulturi trying to look for bela but the Voulturi can't find her because none of there powers work on her. But they could find edward and when they find him (maybe in chicago). He doesn't tell them where bella is because he still wants to keep her safe. So since he doesn't say anything the Voulturi kill him and he dies so heroic. So Bella could either be ith jacob or byherself. But bella is still devastated when she finds out that edwrad was killed by the Voulturi, so it might be hard for her to be with anyone else for awhile. Well anyways I really like the tory and I hope you keep on going!:)love it
| a.fall.from.grace chapter 10 . 7/16/2007
great story. update more plz
| BrownEyedGurl chapter 10 . 7/16/2007
Great job. I cant wait to see what you do with this story
| EdwardFangJasperEmmettIggysigh chapter 10 . 7/16/2007
Good, good! Update!