Reviews for Civilized
Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Cool. I almost feel like I ought to read some Dostoevsky... maybe I'll just read some Stephan King instead _~
Sailor nova 1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Good...short.
Frannie1 chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Good one. I like the last couple of sentences.
That's What She Said chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Hmm...makes you wonder doesn't it? Nice one-shot, I really like the stories you write of Ben. You give the reader the chance to experience your idea of Ben's life. Great job.
Malvolia chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Don't you love reviewers whose whole premise is "I don't get it," and then they think that necessarily means that it's the writer's problem?

I liked it. Which is possibly not any more valid than saying I didn't like it, but...oh well. The last sentence was especially good. And I like how you remind us that Ben has reading glasses. I hadn't thought about him reading without them before.
Light at the End of the Tunnel chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
i don't want to be mean, but i don't get the whole point of this story. If it was the first chapter of a longer story, i'd add it to my alerts because it's a GREAT beginning. I'd suggest using this as an introduction to a story of your own and somehow tie it in with his situation.