|Reviews for Logging On|
| Akoolpoptart chapter 3 . 10/21
Review of Chapter 3
Like it so far, reminds me a lot of some of my experiences in Destiny. But I kinda would have liked there to be a little more interaction outside of the game. For instance, a scene of them having dinner and planning out what their next move, or swapping stories of things that happened during their game, or even discussing their classes, I mean Kite even said that Akira needed to hit the books more often in the last chapter. Just my thoughts
| JordanCruz93 chapter 10 . 1/23/2015
| UFDF Naruto chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
Hello, i don't know if you still log in as i have not seen any activity since 2012 and i don't know if you still read the reviews for your old stories but it is not often that i read stories that i feel like reviewing
First i want to say that i am a huge .hack fan, i own all 7 games and have seen all of the Anime.
Your story telling skills are amazing, i felt that the personality you gave Kite and Blackrose were spot on, most of the story is great and believable and i loved the Epilogue
My only complain would be how you made them win the last battle, they basically cheated, something that i feel kite would NEVER do, its just not in his character to cheat, the only reason he ever used the bracelet was because he HAD too , never for personal gains such as how he used it to win the tournament
My only other complaint was how you underused Haseo, yes i completely understand that this was a story focused around Kite and Blackrose but there was so much more that you could have done with in during the fights other then shoot bullets and be the team healer
There is also how Endrence was so out of character but since this story was made before you played GU 2 and 3 I can overlook it :P
That being said I still loved this story and will be looking at other stories in your list, if any of them are as well written as this one, I will not be disappointed :)
Again I don't know if you still read these or care, but I felt that this story deserved it :)
| Taeniaea chapter 10 . 3/18/2012
| pika995 chapter 10 . 7/8/2009
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LUVSH THIS STORY SO MUCH. I have the game .hack/infection and im at the part where kite and blackRose have t0 fight skeith part 1. omg the game is so cool
| Kunaigirl chapter 10 . 6/17/2009
I really loved this story! \(O)/
| EternalPKK chapter 10 . 6/1/2009
| KnotofRibbon chapter 10 . 2/7/2009
! Seriously, I may be incredibly sleep deprived but that's because I couldn't look away from this story. It was the best .Hack/ fanfic I've read. You kept everyone in character, and based it around my two favorite characters. ;) I loved Kite and Blackrose's relationship. I think it would probably be something like that. I like how you kept their ages right on instead of changing them like a lot of other people do, too.
Anyway, it was amazing.
| animeboredstickman12123 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
...I'm liking this story already. o.o
Kite and Blackrose are BACK!1!1! :3
Now for the actual review. -Cough, cough.-
Good gramar, didn't see any real noticable mistakes, excellent humor, by the way. It matched Blackrose quite well. D
I don't really see much things wrong with the length, it's still an awesome story so far. I'll keep reading, now. ;D
-P.S.- Yay Helba and her hacking skillz. X3
| LordHatredX chapter 10 . 8/20/2008
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| SynctrainerLucas chapter 10 . 6/10/2008
Good story I love the fact that you included facts about Japan it made seem more real.
P.S. I love the story pelease(sp) make a sequel when you have more Ideas ok.
| SynctrainerLucas chapter 9 . 6/10/2008
Endurences(sp) is funny in that last part
| SynctrainerLucas chapter 8 . 6/10/2008
I also think that they made him annoying on purpose too.
| The Fool's Journey chapter 10 . 4/23/2008
Just finished reading the 10 chapters and I must say it was great, I was hooked. The story was fairly simple but charming, as we saw Kite and Blackrose both online and outside of 'The World'. The characters were likable as well. Keep up the good work.
| Kefka VI chapter 10 . 1/21/2008
This was pretty good