Reviews for The Fifth World
Nayame chapter 2 . 5/13/2007
I like your style of writing (and it's easy to read which is good because english isn't my mother-language...)

You used so many "nice" words in your second chapter that it just gave me the impression that all that will become something like hell in the next chapters... And I thought that before reading the last lines. Anyways, really good beginning Keep on writing :)
fantasyfan7 chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
wow who knew i-i mean "Bella" liked tamales

great story )