Reviews for My Last Breath
Summing up the Stars chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
:( My heart...
SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
*crying uncontrollablely*... NOOOOOOOO! T.T
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Dude! Why?! Crying...crying. Why in any of the different fanfiction, why does no one think to tell donnie how he died when he goes to the further so when he goes back, it can be avoided? Donnie can't die! He's the best. Sad
jmg0292 chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
Hawkeye1991 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
I have read your story about 4 times now and every time it makes me cry. The powerful love that Raph and Donnie show towards each other is beautiful and so emotional that to me this one of the best story on this site. Well Done :D
Grrrrlz chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I cried it was that awesome 3
madagascarmaster chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
*crying waterfalls*
No More Love chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
good story but sad too, at least Donny didn't suffer as bad as he could have
ChubbyTabby chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
NO! That was so sad!

Awesome story, by the way - you're a really good writer.
Enigma chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
You captured each aspect, each character perfectly. You have some serious talent, my friend. One thing I would change if I were you is change purple dragons to foot ninjas. I know I'm nit-picking, but it would make better sense since the foot use weapons like katanas while the purple dragons use unfair weapons like guns. But it is totally up to you. :)

I'm sure I'm giving a spamming review for the fact that this story is AMAZING and everyone already stated that this is one of the greatest death-fics ever. In my opinion, I think it really is the greatest. I really don't think that I've read a better one.

As my friend and I discussed, it takes some major writing skills and a true grasp of the characters' feeling to make a succesful death-fic, and you pulled it off with flying colours. You even made countless people cry!

All in all, I think you should be exceedingly proud of yourself! Sorry for the long review! :)
movedkthanks chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I cried.

Like a baby.

I've read a couple fics about Donnie dying, but have to say... this was probably the most powerful.
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Great story and very sad. Poor Raph! That had to be hard for him to do. You are truly a good writer.

The Bubbly One,

Rose of Hope chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
w-wow...oh my-oh my god. This was should make a life would be and if Raph keeps his promise.
Elsiah chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
I've been wanting to get around to reading this one for awhile and wow, I'm so glad I did. I think I was shaking almost the entire time while reading. Such a powerful piece. Wonderful job.
LadyDragonRain chapter 1 . 5/10/2007 look at me I'm blubbering. *Sniffles*

Such a wonderful story.. you captured Donatello and Raphael so well. Heart wrenching, moving, captivating.

Well done.

Lady Rain
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