Reviews for Their Hero
aradonai chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
HAHA! I just realized it was parody when James started talking in third person and said Harry's insanely long-named brother. Sorry for my slowness. The story is brilliant, funny and very original. Keep up the awesome work!

Pearl of Hope chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
Amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
lord lazy pants chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
one thing to say. continue.
Gabwr chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
Great chapter. The poker game was funny. I can't wait to read more.
Since When chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
I didn't read anything that rubbed me the wrong way as you put it. I, however, didn't get the whole three of spades and jack of diamonds unless you were insinuating that Isabella helped Harry cheat along with Joesph. I loved the chapter and I hope you update soon. I was wondering if you could make the chapters longer. I read the chapter so fast because I am excited but before I know it I am at the end with nothing to read :( Anyway UPDATE SOON!

Since When
spedclass chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
LoveTheFiction chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
Well, I think that you are weird...I actually like this chapter...story...fiction...load of grammar mistakes XD I just Love it all!

Update soon! By the way, I don't care that you just updated today *pouts sulkily*

Gabwr chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
This seems pretty interesting. I agree with what Bobby said about all the hero stuff. I'll be waiting to read more.
LoveTheFiction chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
This story is really starting to grow on me. I know that you just posted this, what, 2 days ago, but I fear that the inevidably dull, boring, manditory question is about to come up so here it goes...Are you going to update soon?

Well I guess I just wanted to tell you how much I'm starting to like this story and and that horrible question, so now that it's done I'll just leave you in peace XD

OH, this is my real name by the way just to lazy to log in at the moment.

Keep writting,

Marikili68 chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
i love your story update soon
shinigami69 chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
very good
He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
he cant run away at 2, unless hes found someone then, assuming he lives for more then a year, would forget how to speak
aradonai chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
It sounds like this could be an interesting story and it's well written. But I don't think you should have Harry running away from the orphanage at age 2, it's completely unbelievable. Keep up the great work.

scardi chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
An interesting start! I really hope you will continue soon!
Bluesnowman chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Interesting start.
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