|Reviews for The Art of the Deal|
| SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 2/10
I,m hell of impressed by the story and your evident talent.
Shamr you dont write anymore. Ff at leadt.
Good luck with whatever you are doing with your life.
| holyscythe chapter 1 . 2/10
awesome story please continue
| trendax09 chapter 4 . 2/1
Soooo... Update pls?
| tri2 chapter 4 . 1/29
please continue its such a good read
| Broken Ascendent chapter 4 . 1/27
Ohhh, do go on.
| Annoy mouse chapter 4 . 1/7
This is freaking awesome. I love it so very much. Please continue this amazing story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
This is a amazing story! However, it does seem weird for him to be so young! Its a shame you've stopped writing.
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
Like the 4th or 5th time I came back to reread this, I wondered if Hitomi could be Ai & Mai's mother...
I'm still hoping for more of this fascinating story.
| Googlemo chapter 4 . 11/21/2014
WTF?! It ended when things started to HAPPEN?! REALLY?!
Ok, I knew this story was unfinished and abandoned but started reading anyway and got my share of fun, here is the only fault of this story:
-NARUTO IS TOO FCKING YOUNG!
This story is complete AU, there is now point in keeping Naruto a 7-11years old boy! This story would be better if Naruto was at least 3-5 years older and some Boy-Girl friction actually happened!
| Googlemo chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Good, altho ages should be twiked abit to make it more real... but works even this way.
| SeverlyLate chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
Glorious read. Kudos. You do have a gift!
Shame you dont write anymore.
Good luck with whatever you do with your life now.
| apeljohn chapter 4 . 10/26/2014
This is extremely readable. Shame it doesn't seem likely to continue.
| shyd1 chapter 4 . 9/19/2014
What an awesome, intriguing story! Couldn't stop reading!
| shyd1 chapter 3 . 9/19/2014
Squeee! Oh god this is awesome!
| Slim Jim chapter 4 . 9/18/2014
OH COME ON.
WHY ARE ALL THE GOOD FICS ABANDONDED?