|Reviews for The Art of the Deal|
| The Richmaster chapter 4 . 4/16
This is a really good story, well written, showing proper character development and based around an interesting concept; you have done a great job. Extra notes:
1. Looking at it Anko really does posses the kinds of skills that would be perfect for a job like that but on Konaha she would be less able to make use of them
2. Taki mentioned seeing the blacksmith four years ago, so that means her clan has been there at least that long and they wouldn't of been hired until, at least, around six months after he left Konaha so Naruto should be nearing thirteenth birthday at least; his hormones would really start messing with him soon
3. You gave a good show of the political perspective without writing endlessly over barely related facts which helped keep me interested
4. I'm curious as to if/when Shin would turn up again; it seems like a 'surpass your mentor' kind of thing that would end up happening
This was a good read with a solid foundation; it's pity how unlikely it is that I'll see more.
| DisobedienceWriter chapter 3 . 3/30
I still love this story. Perhaps, someday, there will be a continuation...
| devilsama666 chapter 4 . 3/30
This is brillant , really . I love the premise and am exited to read more . Good job, keep it up !
lazyass out !
| jcampbellohten chapter 4 . 3/23
Quite interesting. It's a shame it wasn't continued further. Were you planning for Shin to ever show up again in any capacity?
| SonOfNenji chapter 2 . 3/20
I think Naruto just topped Rock Lee?
No gen or ninjutsu? Sure, no problem. Azure Beast says hello.
Oh... no chakra at all? Pure business?... ok.
And I LOVE your style of writing and perspective on shinobi business. It's bloody fascinating!
Instantly a favorite.
| SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 2/10
I,m hell of impressed by the story and your evident talent.
Shamr you dont write anymore. Ff at leadt.
Good luck with whatever you are doing with your life.
| holyscythe chapter 1 . 2/10
awesome story please continue
| trendax09 chapter 4 . 2/1
Soooo... Update pls?
| tri2 chapter 4 . 1/29
please continue its such a good read
| Broken Ascendent chapter 4 . 1/27
Ohhh, do go on.
| Annoy mouse chapter 4 . 1/7
This is freaking awesome. I love it so very much. Please continue this amazing story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
This is a amazing story! However, it does seem weird for him to be so young! Its a shame you've stopped writing.
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
Like the 4th or 5th time I came back to reread this, I wondered if Hitomi could be Ai & Mai's mother...
I'm still hoping for more of this fascinating story.
| Googlemo chapter 4 . 11/21/2014
WTF?! It ended when things started to HAPPEN?! REALLY?!
Ok, I knew this story was unfinished and abandoned but started reading anyway and got my share of fun, here is the only fault of this story:
-NARUTO IS TOO FCKING YOUNG!
This story is complete AU, there is now point in keeping Naruto a 7-11years old boy! This story would be better if Naruto was at least 3-5 years older and some Boy-Girl friction actually happened!
| Googlemo chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Good, altho ages should be twiked abit to make it more real... but works even this way.