Reviews for The Art of the Deal
Mangaelf1997 chapter 3 . 7/20
Have Henry Ford, John D Rockefeller, Andrew Carnegie, JP Morgan, Cornelius Vanderbilt, Steve Jobs, and Bill Gates as his new advisors to replace the once he fired, and make them loyal to Naruto. In Art of The Deal.
Mangaelf1997 chapter 4 . 7/20
You know what If you make baritone hire a man named Henry Ford and have him as an advisor and right hand man.
jackalopian chapter 4 . 7/15
Really cool story. I enjoyed reading it. Naruto is admittedly very little like he is in the original storyline... but I daresay that's justifiable. There are a lot of balls up in the air which makes it hard to predict where the story could conceivably go: exactly how I like my novels :) Also, it was good to every once in a while throw in a reminder as to Naruto's actual age, that definitely got lost sometimes with the vague lapsing of time.
alemery chapter 4 . 7/14
This is pure gold! If there were more stories of this quality I would be a very happy person.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/14
This story is just pure amazing I've read a lot and I have to say this is my favorite could you please keep going with if you could that would be awesom
tutcat chapter 3 . 6/26
More plz I know it's been years but more
Narue-Nara-chan chapter 4 . 6/18
Second read more than worth it! Thank you!
Rakaan chapter 4 . 6/14
Please continue this!
Rakaan chapter 3 . 6/14
Hot damn that was beautiful.
Oliver chapter 4 . 6/9
May I have some more
shade chapter 4 . 6/8
this has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read on fanfiction and so unique too. shame it hasn't been updated in a while if you've stopped writing it, pity but id of liked to of seen more chapters. anyway its awesome.
uwishuwerecool chapter 4 . 5/31
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please write more for this story i love this soooooooooooo much
The Richmaster chapter 4 . 4/16
This is a really good story, well written, showing proper character development and based around an interesting concept; you have done a great job. Extra notes:
1. Looking at it Anko really does posses the kinds of skills that would be perfect for a job like that but on Konaha she would be less able to make use of them
2. Taki mentioned seeing the blacksmith four years ago, so that means her clan has been there at least that long and they wouldn't of been hired until, at least, around six months after he left Konaha so Naruto should be nearing thirteenth birthday at least; his hormones would really start messing with him soon
3. You gave a good show of the political perspective without writing endlessly over barely related facts which helped keep me interested
4. I'm curious as to if/when Shin would turn up again; it seems like a 'surpass your mentor' kind of thing that would end up happening

This was a good read with a solid foundation; it's pity how unlikely it is that I'll see more.
DisobedienceWriter chapter 3 . 3/30
I still love this story. Perhaps, someday, there will be a continuation...
devilsama666 chapter 4 . 3/30
This is brillant , really . I love the premise and am exited to read more . Good job, keep it up !
lazyass out !
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