| Reviews for The Art of the Deal |
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   SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 2/10 I,m hell of impressed by the story and your evident talent. Shamr you dont write anymore. Ff at leadt. Good luck with whatever you are doing with your life. |
| holyscythe chapter 1 . 2/10 awesome story please continue |
| trendax09 chapter 4 . 2/1 Soooo... Update pls? |
| tri2 chapter 4 . 1/29 please continue its such a good read |
| Broken Ascendent chapter 4 . 1/27 Ohhh, do go on. |
| Annoy mouse chapter 4 . 1/7 This is freaking awesome. I love it so very much. Please continue this amazing story! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014 This is a amazing story! However, it does seem weird for him to be so young! Its a shame you've stopped writing. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2014 Like the 4th or 5th time I came back to reread this, I wondered if Hitomi could be Ai & Mai's mother... I'm still hoping for more of this fascinating story. Thanks! |
| Googlemo chapter 4 . 11/21/2014 WTF?! It ended when things started to HAPPEN?! REALLY?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Ok, I knew this story was unfinished and abandoned but started reading anyway and got my share of fun, here is the only fault of this story: -NARUTO IS TOO FCKING YOUNG! This story is complete AU, there is now point in keeping Naruto a 7-11years old boy! This story would be better if Naruto was at least 3-5 years older and some Boy-Girl friction actually happened! |
| Googlemo chapter 1 . 11/21/2014 Good, altho ages should be twiked abit to make it more real... but works even this way. |
| SeverlyLate chapter 4 . 11/8/2014 Glorious read. Kudos. You do have a gift! Shame you dont write anymore. Good luck with whatever you do with your life now. |
| apeljohn chapter 4 . 10/26/2014 This is extremely readable. Shame it doesn't seem likely to continue. |
| shyd1 chapter 4 . 9/19/2014 What an awesome, intriguing story! Couldn't stop reading! |
| shyd1 chapter 3 . 9/19/2014 Squeee! Oh god this is awesome! |
| Slim Jim chapter 4 . 9/18/2014 OH COME ON. WHY ARE ALL THE GOOD FICS ABANDONDED? |