Reviews for The Art of the Deal
onepieceDUDE24 chapter 4 . 10/11/2020
You have to continue this
Guest chapter 4 . 11/7/2019
Although quite well written as it is, I'm really hoping that this build up about temari will pay off.
It seemed to me like you have focused too much on Temari's preparation. Too many words used for something that could have been written using half of the words you did. No matter how important she will be, this lengthy introduction is too lengthy for its worth.
You used less words in describing Naruto's hesitation with change to his resolve and his steps in expansion than Temari's intro.
But hey, it's been nine years. Whatver right?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
Shin is based on Pres. Trump, isn't he?

LMAO
LordofTerror chapter 2 . 9/3/2019
why do you keep calling it The Wind country or the Sunagakure or the Fire country? It's simply Sunagakure, Wind country, Fire country and so on no need to keep putting The before it every time
sonic chapter 4 . 4/6/2019
good chapter!
brindani chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
Every few years I return to this splendid piece of awesome. Excellent work!
Mestre720 chapter 4 . 1/16/2019
This is the second time I read it! You really should continue this fanfiction!
Sage Nameless chapter 4 . 10/9/2018
Wow, this fic is good. REALLY good. One of the most unique fics I have EVER come across
jukehero461 chapter 4 . 7/21/2018
Fantastic. A great concept and a great story. I'm sad to see the lack of updates, but I shall hope for more and say thank you for the excellent work that's been done already!
WhenTBC chapter 4 . 7/10/2018
Please I beg of you C! Continue this amazing story. I dont even know if you have this account anymore, but I can only pray and hope one day you remember about this fanfic and decide to continue again. I am a fan of this story and have read it multiple times.
Silence42 chapter 3 . 5/14/2018
but the kokuen clan had a very GOD information network
asighoaighnqllg chapter 4 . 5/12/2018
Damn. This story is great. One of the rare few which doesn't fit into Konoha hating stereotypes and mindless bashing. I honestly enjoyed reading it. It was a pleasure. I hope you update this story someday. The vibes this fic gives off are thrilling.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/19/2018
For every god out there plz continue this story or I'll steal it
zearph chapter 4 . 2/1/2018
Would like to see more of this
1upLinty chapter 4 . 1/12/2018
Gimme more.
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