Reviews for All In The Timing
Jessica-Robyn chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I love the idea that this is what's going through his head trying to make the perfect first impression. Even though it's AU it felt very true to character and would have even worked in series. Your writing was fantastic and I am totally surprised that this hasn't gotten the attention and praise it should. Great work!
Hopelessly Unromantic chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
It was confusing, but then I got it. Then it was confusing again, but I understood. And the process repeated, but I understood. And then I liked it. Very much. (Unique way of writing this, yes. Wow, I'm bad with words.) :)
Techno Skittles chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Whoooooa. I got all confused at first. There were so many scenarios, it just didn't make sense. But all of it was cleared up in the end. Nice story
AnNyanimous chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Lol he hasn't even talked to her yet XD nice BB!
Logic-is-overrated chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I loved this story :3 and i really love this couple because it is the only slash couple i support XD
DarkSmile chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
that was really cute
pinkconchshell chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
hehe thAt was funny! it was actually one of the better fics that i've read.
It's a beauty spot not a mole chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
This story reminded me of a horrible pick up line that my good mate made up.

"I haven't got my library card, but can I check you out?" It's terrible, I know, and tacky.

Unlike your story however. Absolutely gorgeous, and I love the innocent, cute, adorable, I'm-trying-to-be-a-flirt-but-I-suck personality with Gar. That's always what I aim for in my stories too. It's such a good idea for a little story, and I might just borrow half the idea for one of my own one day!

Thanks for the good read,

It's a beauty spot not a mole.
wawaboy2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Okay that was very funny...
gladdecease chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Ha, I love this thing. It reminds me of a one-act play I saw last year...I'm pretty sure the title is identical, and the "timing" idea is the same. The play was a lot of fun, and so was reading this story.

Great job on it.
Miss Apollo chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
a little confusing at first, but once i got it i LOVED it! the concept of this was so original and adorable! i havent read ur stuff in a while and i love the AU stories ur doing now. cant wait to see more from u! great job!
Coeus chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
I really liked this. It seemed very realistic. That's exactly how daydreams actually go, revising it until it goes just how you want it to. Of course, the reality is never how you imagined it, but that's not the point.

Was this by chance inspired by the movie Next? There is a scene in that movie that is similar to this.

Regardless, great fic. I enjoyed reading it.
Seshiiira chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
I feel this story was clever and poetic

and all around fantastic!
Enter wonderland chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
hey your story was really cool

really interesting to see one in that particuler way
Belladonna Kyle chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Rather cute, all the different possiblities were diffently interesting, what's Beast-boy doing watching porn anyway?
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