Reviews for Creative kid
Tsukiko K chapter 1 . 9/16
I had to log out tocorrect myself, I just reread it and saw that it said automail. I was confused and misread it.
Tsukiko K chapter 1 . 9/16
Um, Ed's right arm is his automatic arm, just like his left leg is his automail leg. I think he uses his left hand because of this, but I can't be too sure.
luluhrh chapter 1 . 11/4/2014

ha! that'll teach Must-nag-people (Mustang) to mess with EDWARD ELRIC!
f.tastarossa chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
hahaha poor colonel XD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Owlgrrl chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Very good. One spot you had except instead of expect, though.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
loved it
msnekochibiedwardelricfangirl chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Hahaha edward with a girlish voice really roy yea its a lil soft but nowhere near girly and edward you are a dead sexy devious chibi and thats why we love you ;)
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Haha very cute story! :)
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Chie chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
It's a good story, and it's funny.

I only spotted one mistake and it's in the first line.

(even people outside the buliding would HERE him just fine)

The word you are looking for are Hear, Hope I helped xD
TecknaTeckna chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
nice fic, but edward is left handed not right handed. he can't write with his right hand because of his automail, so is left handed. so if he broke his automail, it wouldn't matter, coz he writes with his left handed(even if the handwriting is bad)
BlueRose chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
OMG I laugh so much

Good fic

Ed is so evil but Mustang deserve it

DumApple chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
aww. I'd like to read what was on that report... A nice one-shot.

Elrics are Evil.
IllusionOfAghony chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Ed is evil, Roy's an idiot anbd this ficlet was hilarious
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