Reviews for The Squib
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 11 . 2/22
The mood was lost...hoping.
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 10 . 2/22
Too much talking...kiss her! ***sigh***
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 8 . 2/22
Um?
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 7 . 2/22
Still here.
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 6 . 2/21
Still here...
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 5 . 2/21
Can't stop now.
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 4 . 2/21
Hurray! I am hooked!
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 3 . 2/21
I can understand the use of "old witch" but the continual use of it was shocking all the same. Now a mirror...hmmm I am staying put.
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 2 . 2/21
Hmmmmm...I can see it and hear it...need more meat, but I will be patient.
Gail 3 of 5 chapter 1 . 2/21
Interesting beginning... A Squib and Snape could be a promise of turbulence!
Jemennuie chapter 3 . 3/30/2012
This is very interesting. I really like your writing style and your way of slowly unfolding the scenes; it also makes your characters stay IC, and I like how you're consistent with canon that Snape was a cruel teacher and a loner.
bookivore chapter 15 . 9/21/2010
In some ways this is such a cute awkward scene that the first thing I want to do is quibble. He's up in the mountains, solar might not be to consistent how about wind power? But I love how he assumes the worst and has prepared a surprise gift to finagle her into moving in.
Astra Leo chapter 16 . 3/15/2010
A very good story. :)
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 4/30/2009
She is chasing him down. The Ministry should have had to recompense him.
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 4/30/2009
I hope all will be well!
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