Reviews for So Close, And Yet So Far
LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Obsessor16 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
wow... i really liked this one and your other one too. I like how you give Jon some feelings towards Aloanna and she chooses George but it is obviously still a fact that she loves jon.
Edwardjustproposed chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Infallible.Mirage chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Beautiful, I liked this better than the prequel. I like how you wrote the really shows the tension that's pulling at Jon from within. And the 'never again' makes me laugh, very Lioness. If you don't mind some CC though...some parts in the middle, especially the area where she goes into labor, it seemed a bit stilted, I think maybe you rushed through that part too fast.
Verasque chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I liked the metaphor of distance you used here :) It conveyed Jon's feelings quite admirably. Great work!
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
this is good i liked it i think it is as good as its prequel
AlannaXJon4ever chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
i like this one because it's at jon's point of view.

i really think it could have been a bit longer...but anyhoo i think it deserves 4 stars!