Reviews for The Death of Another
dancingdimples95 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
i really liked the whole story, and i hope that you write past 5 chapters!
dancingdimples95 chapter 5 . 4/25/2009
i love the whole, 'Love, the School Professors’, thing!
dancingdimples95 chapter 4 . 4/25/2009
the janitors name is Argus Filch. great story by the way!
Elemeffayoh chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
i feel sorry for harry friends going out and not telling eachother i feel your pain bro and slytherian eh? i hope naruto shuts malfoy up
Elemeffayoh chapter 4 . 9/17/2008
poor janitor naruto should make his clones clean it up and i wonder who is gonna cheer him up or w.e
Elemeffayoh chapter 3 . 9/17/2008
wow harry is lucky XD i wish naruto was my body guard emo or not
Elemeffayoh chapter 2 . 9/17/2008
he likes hermione :P
Elemeffayoh chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
ninja naruto sweetness
Nebelkind chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
The note from the teachers was very un-teacher-like.. but funny somehow it seemed a little sadistic..
pamellka chapter 3 . 8/31/2008
One question...How did the news travel so fast? He just killed those Death Eaters, and everyone knows all of a sudden? Still a bit too fast with the paste, and...how could Harry not hear when the doors exploded and only when someone screamed?

I'm sorry I'm flaming you like this, but it really is very confusing...
pamellka chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Um...It's not like I want to flame, but things really are going too fast! It's like everything happens in just a minute! You should slow down a bit, otherwise it's a nice story. But...How does Naruto know english?
aylan chapter 5 . 7/11/2008
If you still want to know the janitor's name is Filch.
souldemon01 chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
the story is awsome

i like the plot line and the suspense at the end of the chapter

i cant wait when you update
where-is-my-tennant chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
i like the idea, but i think you are rushing this story a little too much.
Fumetsu Kaji chapter 5 . 1/8/2008
Hahaha! I cant wait to see this 'Self-Defense class'. I hope that Naruto will be alright. Please update again soon.
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