|Reviews for His Loss, Her Words, Their Adventure|
| LyraMusica chapter 16 . 10/1/2011
OMG! THIS STORY WAS BEAUTIFUL :*) I really can't see Envy turning good. LOL. So this was interesting :) Great adventure! I love how Den kept disappearing XD The ending was great! I love Al ;)
| Anarion Star-Dragon chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Well done story overall.
| Ceaselessfall chapter 15 . 8/15/2010
lol I was wondering when they would notice that Den was missing XD
| L Lawleit2425 chapter 16 . 10/22/2009
...um...this is extremly well written...but in my opinion, Ed and Winry dont go together...and u should ad Al into it, to make more funnier..:D Well, thats what I think, but I like the story. I got the link from the library in FMA vol. 17...im guessing u put it in there...but i took it out and keep forgetting to put it back...(srry! dont get mad!)
Otherwise the story's pretty cool.
:D Yay L-sama!
| Glory of Dawn chapter 16 . 9/1/2009
It was good. The last chapter didn't quite sate my thirst for fluff, but, I'll live.
Congratulations on being the first person I've seen actually have Ed propose.
| Glory of Dawn chapter 10 . 9/1/2009
This is really good.
...I hate how I'm burning through all the good fics so damned fast.
Back to read more later.
| Glory of Dawn chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
THAT was reverse psychology if I've ever seen it.
Good so far.
| Sakimono chapter 16 . 3/26/2008
PLEASE write another EdXWinry i've read every single one you've written and they're amazing! PLEASE keep writing! We all LUV your fics! (excuse the extreme use of capitalization lol)
| Sakimono chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
The plural for humonculus is humonculi. Good story
| sxyinubab chapter 16 . 11/18/2007
Aw that was so flippin adowable...i loved it
| fullmetaltiger57 chapter 16 . 10/16/2007
poor al. he's my fav dude in the show.
| SwayingShamrock chapter 16 . 10/3/2007
That was great. -sniffle- I just love it. No matter how long it was great job. _ I really like how you showed what happened later. Maybe I'll have to steal your idea and get Edward and Winry married... hmm... lol
| HanaNoHaru chapter 16 . 9/12/2007
aw that was THE cutest ending ever! Ed is soo cute with Winry. This was one of my favorite storys by far! BRAVO! _
| dennisud chapter 16 . 6/29/2007
Cute story a bit waffy in spots but overal an enjoyable read.
BTW I wuld have thought Wraith(in the anime not the manga) would have been a better Humuculi to turn rather than Envy but hey its your story!
lust yeah she would have turned and did in the end when she died!
-In the anime!
| dennisud chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
With Pinacko and Al not there you may have lost some key plot catalysts, but we'll see hw this goes!