Reviews for Necessary Rites
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Awesome. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Awesome look into John's first solo hunt. I was suprised that he took the boys with him instead of leaving them safely with Jim!

I loved the fact that Dean was the one to get the diaper rash ointment-John's reaction to that was sweet!
Linnie McCary chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Super job! If I were fed a steady diet of your writing, I might come to have some sympathy for John, some day. Oh, but wait-you also write about poor, broken little Dean. *any potential sympathy for John goes right out the window*

Love the tone you've created, and love your style. Thanks!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Their life just tears me apart! Dragging those babies around like that and leaving a 5-year-old in charge...I'll just never get over it all. Heart-wrenching and beautifully told!

Not too surprising that John didn't make the connection...he would have later on, I'm sure.

Great job!