|Reviews for Before It's Too Late|
| Chris chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Thats was a cute one shot. Good job
| Cyberslayer-00 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
this is the best outcome to losing a bet I have ever read, thnak you for this! .
| narutoandbleachfan294 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
aw so sweet...
| bonbonxoxo chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
This is a great story i love it
| Linktriforce007 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Kinda reminds me of when I won that bet. That was a long time ago. )
I'm sure some people are happy I won it too..
What was the bet? If Buguese survived after 49?
| Authority Man 37 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Wicked! A very romantic story in my view. You did a great job, writing this story. Keep up the hard work! (_)
| SALLY JEAN FAVRO chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
THIS STORY WAS SO VERY ROMANTICI LIKE IT VERY MUCH.
| Russa chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Hi! Aw, this is such a sweet story. I noticed that used the word "though" alot. And in some places it wasn't really necessary. Such as in the sentence: "Smiling though, she walked off, pondering Aqune's word's." Consider instead: "Giving a small smile, she walked off, pondering Aqune's words." It's not too important, but it does seem less repeative. Other than that, this story was good. Hunter walking in on Corona and then trying to ask her out was so cute. And Corona finally told her feelings to Hunter. The ending was nice with them confessing their love for one another, and sharing the kiss. Aw, so sweet. Well, nicely done. Good luck with your other stories and I'll cya later. Ciao! _