Reviews for Not So Invincible
Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
This is a very well thought out drabble. Writing can be cathartic when one is sad. The only error I saw was that 'tought' should be 'taught'.
pinklen98 chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
loved this oneshot. it was so touching


im sorry for your loss. it sucks losing someone you love
jonoave chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Good drabble, and I like your little venture through Hunter's head. No, don't take this down!
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
No please don't take it down. This was amazing. I am sorry that your Great-Grandma died, and I'd like to offer my condolences.

The story really carried through in a characters' mind that not many people go in properly. You gave a lot of explanations to their actions and made it make sense.

I love the Blake/Tori mention and the Hunter/Kelly.

Great story, I love it.
Claire Henry chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Hey persolny(sp) loved it because I love angsty and broody Hunter. he's my favorite character from Ninja Storm because that he's so broody and mysritous(sp)