Reviews for The Invitation
magicalwiz chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
The first 2 chapters were really good. The only problem with the last chapter was that it ended so abruptly.

Great Story!

~magicalwiz
jhbjgvgtvibvkjh chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
thank you so much for not making lily an idot, when she kissed james, i hate it when people do that.
Nytd chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
This was a fun little romp. Good job incorporating all the required words.

I can so see Dumbledore being a supporter of wearing your PJ's on your birthday! (maybe with some really comfy socks.)

Nice job!
Padfootatheart chapter 3 . 7/8/2007
Aww, good ending! I like how regretful you made James and how hard he tried to concentrate on everything else besides how beautiful/great Lily is. Well written!
Padfootatheart chapter 2 . 7/8/2007
I love how you wrote Lily...very nice!
Padfootatheart chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Aw so good. Cute fluff but not too much! I really like this, I thought the idea of James dancing around was quite funny also!
RavieGrint chapter 3 . 7/7/2007
Wicked cute. _ Wonderful job!
bookreader1743 chapter 3 . 7/4/2007
Love it!
Lexie-H chapter 3 . 7/4/2007
oh, thats cute sunny, really cute. i have one question... exactly how BIG are those dorm rooms?
Cuban Sombrero Gal chapter 3 . 7/3/2007
Ah ... lol!

Great work, it's hard to believe that all this stemmed from one small challenge. guess use of delusional james too, btw!
IAMaMUDBLOOD chapter 3 . 7/3/2007
thanks for finishing! tell me when you write another j/l fic and ill read it (im obsessed with those stories!). and once again thanks for finishing the story. byez
Lexie-H chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
oh nice chappy, this does work well as a chapter story doesn't it? great work! update soon please xx
Cuban Sombrero Gal chapter 2 . 6/21/2007
i'm pleased you continued ... this is great!

I can't wait to see more LJ interaction!

Cuba
RavieGrint chapter 2 . 6/20/2007
Woot! I'm glad you made this a full story. It's great. Please update soon!
cosmopolitan chapter 2 . 6/20/2007
eight min into the party is fashionably late? lol

anywayz, i absolutely adore this fic, i cantw ait for more

keep up the great work
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