Reviews for True Elision |
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Bailey chapter 9 . 1/10/2010 The story is getting boring. :( Are L and Light ever going to even fall in love, or meet? |
A. E. Stover chapter 15 . 1/3/2010 You are truly a skilled and talented writer. You have breathed life into the words on the pages of your story and have formed a picture so perfect, it is impossible to begin describing. The trials that you think of are ingenius. I find both the "Tearing Hands" and the "Marionette Doll" stages to be beautiful and captivating, written with an artistic touch, and insanely disturbing. I will be impatiently awaiting your next update. A. E. Stover |
TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 3 . 12/30/2009 ... I guess it's fine, no need to fret... ... ... I wasn't even aware it's L's hair Light was forced to eat.. ... |
TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 2 . 12/30/2009 ... This sounds very interesting... ... ... I can't wait for Light and L to appear... ... |
TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 1 . 12/30/2009 ... I loved this... ... ... I'm glad I found a trailer of it ... ... |
Sweet-With-Talent chapter 15 . 12/11/2009 This is one of the few times that I have both subscribed to a story and added it to my favorites immediately after and without a doubt about it. I thoroughly enjoy this story, it is well thoughout, developed and consistent. I loved the Trials, though I'm a bit surprised that Raito seems to not recall his own experience of being L and Kira in round two. In this chapter I particularly enjoyed Raito's newfound awkwardness concerning L, whereas the ex-detective seems to ignore most of Raito's blushing moments. I did enjoy that they can now talk more freely but I also think that Raito is getting a bit out of character. He always seems so incontrol of himself in the anime that it's a little hard to imagine that he wouldn't recognize that he's sensing a sort of awkwardness that would only be present in a limited number of cases. I frankly never wish for them to meet Misa and would be gald if someone told them she didn't pass the trails so that Raito and L can finally reconsider who the heck thei person who has been looking for them is. I wonder why Raito isn't questioning why L had to go through the Trials when he never wrote in the Death Note? Either way, I really enjoyed this fic and hope to read the next chpater soon. Tahnk for the read! |
Something chapter 6 . 12/7/2009 Maybe Ezan died... |
baitfish chapter 15 . 12/1/2009 Apparently I've missed something (hopefully not?) and assume you have given up on this fic. If you did, I would have to say it is a great, great shame. This has been one of the most entertaining, engrossing in that suck-you-in-you-forget-everything-else kinda way reads I've ever laid my eyes upon. And that's not only in the fanfic world. I mean this in general, out of everything I've read. If you haven't given up on this fic, then YIPPE!1!1 :P If you're on a long hiatus, or have writer's block, then that's just fine with me because that still means you're working on this. I hope you still are inspired enough to write this fic. Anyway, I'm sorry for my long-windedness. :P Just know that, whether you continue this or not, you've gained a fan(girl :P). |
Moonphase chapter 15 . 11/29/2009 *Reads authors note in horror* Please, please, PLEASE do NOT give up on this fic! I'm a fan and have been reading it for ages! You did such a good job on it its almost like cannon to me! I mean I could imagine this actually happening. ;_; Please do not give up. Your spelling and grammer are spot on, you clearly put in a lot of time and effort, which, as a reader, I apreciate the effort. They ARE NOT ooc. The opposite, you have Light and L very much in character. Its one of the most impressive feats you have managed. Granted, the ida that Light may actually act on his romantic feelings for L is ooc for Light/Kira of the manga/anime, but look at the long journey you had Light go through. If Lights character remained the same despite the rapes and the insights he recieved of oyher people, why that would be a weakness on your part. You took the characters and you developed them. You are doing the impossible of giving Light a realistic redemption!I love the fact that he's never apologised (so like Light.)I love the fact that you have kept them both so intense and intelligent. I only WISH I could write as well as you :) My fave part is the games they play together and when Light was watching L in the morning. I thought that was romantic :) Please, don't give up. We are our own worse critics. |
Anon chapter 15 . 11/18/2009 This is very well written, which is all too rare :/ I would love to see this continued, even though I'm guessing it is safe to assume that won't be happening. Oh well, thank you very much for the 15 great, long chapters you've given us :) |
xDaNaExReVeNgEx chapter 1 . 11/17/2009 I've reviewed already, but I'll do it again. Because I want to, and because I need to (this fanfic deserves more reviews!) I just love your story. It's the perfect continuation for the real Death Note story! (I know that it has been said already, and I know that I said it too before, but it's just too good.) It's been more than six months since I finished reading chapter 15, but I'm still unable to stop thinking about it, making theories about what will happen... I can imagine the whole fanfic in manga style, in anime style, or even as a movie. And when I listen to the anime soundtrack (that is, most part of the day), I imagine some scenes from the fanfic with the music playing along ("Light's theme" when L and Light are walking in Mu, for example). Oh, God. Now I sound like an obsessed, lunatic fangirl. Anyway, I'm making a fanart for chapter 14 (when L and Light enter in the hut for the first time) and another for chapter 3 (the hands). When I finish them, I'll post them here.I'm really slow, though D: Please, don't leave this story! If you have to change something in the story, do it, as long as it's still enjoyable. ... unless you're dead, or something. Let's hope not... like someone said before, that would be a huge waste of talent. |
Slo chapter 15 . 11/17/2009 Still waiting patiently :) |
Moonphase chapter 10 . 11/7/2009 God that was so sad. I'm listening to moonlight sonata whilst whatever remains existed of Misa, were crushed ;_; I never liked Misa, I thought she was sadistic, but I did always feel sorry for the women he manipulated; is this maybe Light/Raito learning to not be such a chauvanist? I hope so. You must have very strong and mature morals btw :) |
Moonphase chapter 8 . 11/7/2009 this chappie was fantastic, I had to wipe a few tears when L called out for Watari (I cried over a ff, that has never happened before.) I love L :) And I think he's totally cute, I never thought he was ugly regardless of what the writers wanted. The rape part was...omg. I had to stop reading it for a moment. It was so shocking. May I also add that Misa is scaring the hell out of me. I'm actually a little scare of going to bed... |
Moonphase chapter 7 . 11/7/2009 that was amazing. This fic is incredible. And on your authors note, yes, they are incredibly in character. I can't see how you will make them fall in love. But I can't wait. Seriously, amazing work! |