Reviews for Read or Dare!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
OMG TRY THIS! IT REALLY WORKS!

YOU HAVE TO READ THE WHOLE THING OR IT WONT WORK!

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KEEP GOING DOWN

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HERE WE GO!

SAY THE NAME OF THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE 10 TIMES

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NOW THINK OF SOMETHING THAT YOU REALLY WANT TO DO THIS WEEK...SAY THAT 20 TIMES!

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NOW MAKE A WISH!

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WISH REALLY REALLY HARD!

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NOW THAT YOU OPENED THIS, YOU HAVE TO SEND IT TO 20 BY MIDNIGHT OR YOU WILL HAVE BAD LUCK FOREVER! TRUST ME, I DID THIS AND IT REALLY WORKED!

IF YOU SEND THIS TO 0-3 PEOPLE, THEN YOU WILL HAVE BAD LUCK FOREVER

IF YOU SEND THIS TO 4-7 PEOPLE, THEN YOUR CRUSH WILL LIKE YOU

IF YOU SEND THIS TO 8-13 PEOPLE THEN YOUR CRUSH WILL ASK YOU OUT & b ur gf/bf

IF YOU SEND THIS TO 14-20 PEOPLE, THEN YOU WILL HAVE GOOD LUCK FOREVER, YOUR CRUSH WILL NOT ONLY LIKE YOU, THEY WILL LOVE YOU, AND THEY WILL KISS YOU IN PUBLIC!

WELL, I WILL HURRY UP AND SEND THIS TO 20 PEOPLE IF I WERE YOU!

NO ONE WANTS BAD LUCK FOREVER!
Chargone chapter 16 . 11/28/2012
You randomly shifted to first person for Shane in that last scene. Might want to fix that.
Progos chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
The Word… How many deliberate layers of meaning are there in using that codename for your author avatar? I can only think of two: it fits the bibliophile (bibliotechnical?) theme, and the *biblical* reference (the Word is God).
Wait, the Word isn't "Cron", is it? Omnicide is never cool.
breaktherules chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Hehe, you got lucky there, Shane. I'd give my left arm for a smile from Nancy:) I thought that everyone was in character and I enjoyed this first chapter. Onward to the rest of the chapters!
Daryl chapter 15 . 5/4/2011
i am so glad to read an update to this story.
breaktherules chapter 15 . 5/4/2011
I like how you always write your characters IC. You have the skill and that is great.

I love Rock and Balalika together and Revy is as violent as usual. A fun read!
Daryl chapter 14 . 1/11/2011
loved this. especially the rod parts
Daryl chapter 12 . 5/25/2010
great job. this is my favorite chapter so far. is rin supposed to be like a bad guy or something
BigKwell chapter 12 . 5/25/2010
Maybe the next thing Rin and Mimi might get Nancy to do is to get into a drinking contest with them - unless they run in Apos, that is!
James Birdsong chapter 10 . 11/6/2009
Very cool
Chargone chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
so... i read this [I'm actually familiar with Black Lagoon now, unlike when i first came across the story :)]

it's really good :D

but i don't really have anything more useful to say right now other than to hope that it doesn't take you too long to update again.

oh, and the chapter [i've forgotten which one, unfortunately] where Joker is talking about the paper sisters setting up a detective company? on at least one occasion you have 'defectives' instead of detectives :D

work much appreciated :)
Daryl chapter 10 . 9/25/2009
good job. update soon
Harry2 chapter 10 . 9/23/2009
Sounds like things are going to get VERY interesting! Looks like Yomiko is going to have FOUR visitors in the very near future!
Daryl chapter 9 . 6/2/2009
good job
mg78 chapter 9 . 4/28/2009
I'm glad to see it updated! Hope to see more.

Now if I can only get my story updated...
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