Reviews for Freedom
Guest chapter 14 . 6/30/2015
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MafiaPrincess09 chapter 14 . 2/15/2010
Aw, that was sweet and I loved how you ended the story telling us what happened 2everyone. Great job!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 14 . 11/26/2009
BEAUTIFUL! I love it! I love this whole story and I'm super glad that Max & Alec are together...if only there was a season 3...I love how Alec seems so much in character for me, even Max too, they are perfect for each other and thanks for writing it the way you did. I like squeaked with joy every time Max & Alec kissed D I can't believe that they never kissed on the show!

Beautiful work! D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 13 . 11/26/2009
I swear Dalton & Bree are like a mini Alec & Max and that's so cute D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 12 . 11/26/2009
I LOVE THE CONFESSION of their LOVE! It's so romantic D They are finally together D

Alec's CO story totally makes sense and it's sad (
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 11 . 11/26/2009
Finally! They both know about the other's feelings and how obvious they have been to TC yet they both can't believe it? I swear, why is it always like that? LOL
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 10 . 11/26/2009
YES! I love how Max just turns on Logan D I love how Alec would never force himself on a lady or how they kissed again D Now if they just stopped getting interrupted and finally have that talk! Can't wait D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 9 . 11/25/2009
So a couple days have past and I still can't believe the way Logan was ignoring Max (good for her and those annoying Logan thoughts she was getting)

Bree shocked me at the end when she kicked Alec...I hope she's ok and maybe Dalton's her match?

Awesome!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 8 . 11/25/2009
What is Max to do now? Alec is so sweet D

When Alec said: ‘Uh, I managed to track down this guy – I knew him pretty well at Manticore, from Psy-ops, he was a pretty decent guy. Anyway, I managed to track him down about 3 weeks ago, just after that…. Night.’ Is the 'Night' he's referring to when they first kissed outside of Crash when they were fighting for Max's keys (night of that Harbor Lights supply run)?

Did Max run off with the cure? I guess I'll find out D

Excellent work!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 7 . 11/25/2009
I Love it how everyone else knows that Max & Alec are in love with each other but them...isn't that always the case? LOL Even on first glance at seeing the couple together, they could tell. D

3 reunions in one chapter...LOVE it! I'm still waiting for their profession of love to each other LOL
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
LOVE IT how Alec made a speech again about Max being CO (he's just full of speeches) and I love it when he said ‘We’ve got work to do.’ (total Supernatural reference in my opinion D)

And the mystery person is...i just have to read the next chapter now D

When do they have 'the talk'?
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 5 . 11/25/2009
I LOVE the moment when Alec has Max in his arms as she tells him that she's sorry for not seeing the snipers and that she was afraid to loose him...and when Alec said that he needs Max!

LOVE IT! D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 4 . 11/25/2009
OMG, Max finally did it! The way she's acting, I could have sworn she's in heat...what will Alec do now? I love the ogling over Alec D

The separators are the only things that concern me */~ etc.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 11/25/2009
Very interesting

I would just like to suggest that you separate your views with * or something like when you switch locations or someone's POV or something like that. I think it would be easier. Other than that, very cool with the inner thoughts of the characters D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
I LOVE that Episode! I wish that conversation did happen...would have liked to see Alec defending Max to Sam (like defending a person to their own self) LOL
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