|Reviews for Under the Bloody Moon|
| lkuecrar chapter 7 . 6/18
I was thinking a lot of the writing was flowing to well (and sometimes even rhymed) but then I just realized you're using song lyrics often because I recognized Innocence by Avril Lavigne. You might want to credit the songs that you use...
| Sunshine chapter 2 . 1/28
Sesshomaru is Oc girl... He would never curse like that idc how long he knew Rin .
| ddddaaaae chapter 1 . 1/20
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| Bettyboo2008 chapter 17 . 1/11/2015
Okay so I have been sincerely reading this story to give it a chance and I hope you can take some criticism. If not you can just ignore this. To begin everything started out great a little mushy but good. I feel like you hit a bump in the road with all the lyrics. To me the worst was the song Hero Sesshomaru sounded nothing like himself. Mind you yes love can change people and we have never seen Sesshomaru in love so it's kind of a clean canvas to work with because I know how hard it is to make him lovey but still stay true to his character. I just think if you let him have his own words the scenes would be better. Sometimes the lyrics are so much and cheesy that I have the urge fo skip over them. Now truly seeing as I have not finished the story I will wait till the end to tell you what I really think of it, but other than that I love the characters.
What's going to happen with Rin and Halder? I mean he already seems like a douche, so much that I want to punch his lights out. Also I hope Rin sees the truth in Halder even though I think he does I don't know why she would risk herself just for Halder and Sesshomaru's friendship when there isn't really one, but I guess that's love and or the good of peace. After that what happened between Halder and the nurse? Can't wait to find. Keep up th good wodk ;P
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/30/2014
Invisible by Taylor Swift
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
Leave out all the rest by Linkin park
| PAMILA DE CASTRO chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
Coitada da Rin, ela esta sendo meio idiota neste ponto, pois se ele vai se casar com outra qual é o ponto de ser masoquista e sofrer? Sinceramente eu gosto mais da Rin forte que tem algum orgulho, esta Rin fraca que aceita tudo foge ao personagem que ela deveria ser depois de viver sozinha quando criança, ela deve ser mais forte , mais guerreira e acima de tudo mostrar que ela pode fazer muito mais. Abraços
| overninethousand chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
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| overninethousand chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
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| Heather Vaughn chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
It goes too slow. WAY too slow. And too much fluffiness. Otherwise, it was good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Why does everyone always use songs from 'super chick'
| MizzMarie729 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I have not been on here for a LONG time so I do not know how to reply to any reviews left. To those who find Sesshy OOC. How do you know what he would be like in love? Men and women change when they are in love, small things at first and big things, those who ever truley been in love know this. So I did my best to portray how Sesshomaru would be, how unknowingly or unadmitingly falling unlove changes him without him realizing it. So he isn't really OOC, yes he is slightly, but that is due to a personality growth with new emotions. Improvising ;P lol. Sorry for terrible spelling, I am tired its late and its my birthday lol. Thank you to all you wonderful reviewers who saw my writing for what it was and enjoyed it. I was a lot younger also when I wrote it, heh heh I started this account when I was fifteen or sixteen or something lol and I just turned 23 heh heh.
| anemone dust chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
i find this story difficult to read for omly one reason: sesshoumaru is so ooc that its not even him. please shouldnt even cross his mind. other than that , its a great story?
| Becka chapter 12 . 1/3/2011
Okay i LOVE your story but honestly if you want to improve as a writer USE YOUR OWN WORDS not someone elses the places you use the song lyrics is great and all but ny personal opinion i would like the story more if i didn't read someone elses words in your story write those senes using the words you would say in that situation i would make your peice SO much better
| Becka chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
i love your story but i swear you seem to be putting lines from my favorite songs in here