Reviews for Retribution
Zika chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Like the story so far, but have to correct you: The "maidenhead" doesn't exist. The hymen is a thin membrane that doesn't completely cover the opening, and with the preparation that Jareth did, had he just slid into her, he would not have caused any pain.
Honoria Granger chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
It's Provost Marshal, not Provo...
Guest chapter 15 . 3/13/2013
And so seth is punished LOL that'll teach him. *snicker*
Guest chapter 13 . 3/13/2013
Aww milo..
moira hawthorne chapter 17 . 4/29/2011
!Q!
moira hawthorne chapter 10 . 4/29/2011
Seth you are a turd... LOL... nice plot twist
moira hawthorne chapter 7 . 4/29/2011
a woman's tears are the most powerful weapon know to mankind... the hydrogen bomb... nothing - a mere fly swatter...
moira hawthorne chapter 6 . 4/29/2011
like magnets! very much so!
moira hawthorne chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
HA! I never would of thought to pair George with Jareth!
moira hawthorne chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
Oberon sighed too. "Poor Sarah, in love with the Goblin King." He looked at the woman child, not quite human, not quite Fae, lying on her bed. "Poor child."

not quite human huh?
moira hawthorne chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
well this one starts quite different!
Rising Phoenix-82 chapter 17 . 5/19/2010
And once again I am let speechless my dear, your stories are delightful and magical at the same time.. I am very glad to have read some of your most wonderful stories this week.. Hope that you write a few more to keep me amazed... And remember talent like your is blessed from the fates...

Maria Severino
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
I have read this story 3 or 4 times since I first reveiwed it. And it never fails to entertain me. Is it finished? You don't have a 'complete' designation on it, but it could be finished with the last chapter. Jareth can be so childish at times, ah, but so cam most adult mortals...
Lizzie Hopscotch chapter 17 . 2/28/2010
i really like the way you end your stories...they feel finished but you always get the sense that there is more than what is written. so thank you!

much hugs

lizzie hopscotch
Tsuki Doriimaa chapter 17 . 2/15/2010
::happy little sigh:: I love it _ ::rushes off to bed::
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