|Reviews for Retribution|
| dannisez chapter 17 . 6/30
Awww...just love it Paisley. Well done
| E.J.Smith chapter 17 . 3/5/2015
Hello my name is Pixxilin. And I was just wondering why you haven't updated in a while for this elegant story. I specially love your stories for I can tell that you care for your gift. If you don't wish for this story to continue then you do that, but I do wish that you finish this lovely story,if not for me then for those who still like the stories... I Thankyou for reading this and updating this story( if wanted)
| Wynni chapter 17 . 12/30/2014
Nummy story, I liked how you worked several familiar fae in.
| Zika chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Like the story so far, but have to correct you: The "maidenhead" doesn't exist. The hymen is a thin membrane that doesn't completely cover the opening, and with the preparation that Jareth did, had he just slid into her, he would not have caused any pain.
| Honoria Granger chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
It's Provost Marshal, not Provo...
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/13/2013
And so seth is punished LOL that'll teach him. *snicker*
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/13/2013
| moira hawthorne chapter 17 . 4/29/2011
| moira hawthorne chapter 10 . 4/29/2011
Seth you are a turd... LOL... nice plot twist
| moira hawthorne chapter 7 . 4/29/2011
a woman's tears are the most powerful weapon know to mankind... the hydrogen bomb... nothing - a mere fly swatter...
| moira hawthorne chapter 6 . 4/29/2011
like magnets! very much so!
| moira hawthorne chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
HA! I never would of thought to pair George with Jareth!
| moira hawthorne chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
Oberon sighed too. "Poor Sarah, in love with the Goblin King." He looked at the woman child, not quite human, not quite Fae, lying on her bed. "Poor child."
not quite human huh?
| moira hawthorne chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
well this one starts quite different!
| Rising Phoenix-82 chapter 17 . 5/19/2010
And once again I am let speechless my dear, your stories are delightful and magical at the same time.. I am very glad to have read some of your most wonderful stories this week.. Hope that you write a few more to keep me amazed... And remember talent like your is blessed from the fates...