Reviews for Potential
thump chapter 16 . 8/21
please update!
KittenPrincess chapter 16 . 8/18
thats it?
SleepingSeeker chapter 16 . 1/31
I know it's probably hopeless you ask, but I'm gonna...if you ever for an instant think about updating...you would make this fangirl exceedingly ugly happy! Please, oh please!
SleepingSeeker chapter 14 . 1/31
I don't remember seeing that and I've recently rewatched the 4kids series up until Flash Forward started, but it may have been one little glimpse ...Hun was great in this and Karai's torment and mixed emotions is so incredibly rendered - wonderful job!
SleepingSeeker chapter 13 . 1/31
YES YES YES! You nailed it! You know, I have a plot bunny that one day I plan on writing where they get transported to a world where there are turtles that have evolved, but are actually, you know, turtles. And the boys are NOT considered brethren, at all - but a sort of subfaction of inhabitants of Earth, like humanoids - which, to me, they are! I never accepted that they are just big talking turtles. They are so much more than that. So much more!
SleepingSeeker chapter 12 . 1/31
OH my goodness - I love it - of course I want them to be together - they are my ultimate OTP! But, I love more watching their love be tested and brought to the brink of destruction - to be forged in the fires of intolerance, unfairness, duty and honor - and watch it rise like a phoenix only that much stronger for the anguish and torment it has been put through!
SleepingSeeker chapter 11 . 1/31
Aw, Leo. His poor aching heart...
SleepingSeeker chapter 10 . 1/31
Masterful! You give a much more logical reason why Splinter sends Leo off - Something that I worked into The Tender Trap series...but yes - also, I meant to point this out before in my reviews, I always thought that the writers made it painfully obvious that Leo was hurting mostly about Karai - yes, there was also the burden of his 'failure' in that, he had to choose death for them all in order to achieve success which is an oxymoron if there ever was one - but that there had always been something more, something hinted at between him and Karai - maybe something he couldn't quite understand because of his very naive and innocent nature - but as you so expertly pointed out in this, his brothers all recognized! Oh, this is just fantastic!

Also! That little hint about Donatello's feelings for April - OH MY LORDIE YES!
SleepingSeeker chapter 9 . 1/31
Oh man, that dialogue between Raph and Leo right at the end was like FIREWORKS! So sharp and fantastic! This story is going right into my FAVORITES!
SleepingSeeker chapter 8 . 1/31
Oh my gosh, Raphael, what have you done!? He's ruined any chance that Leo might have had - he's shamed Karai deeply and to a point where she seems to be unable to recover. Oh my gosh!
SleepingSeeker chapter 7 . 1/31
God, I can't stop reading this - I just CAN'T STOP!
SleepingSeeker chapter 6 . 1/31
OMgoodness - NEVER apologize for a long chapter, are you kidding!? I couldn't read this FAST enough, and I'll probably go back and reread it. I love this so! I don't even know if you're still active on FFN - but if you are, you've got a new fan in me!
SleepingSeeker chapter 5 . 1/31
WAAAAAH! OMGOSH, this is so so so amazing!
SleepingSeeker chapter 4 . 1/31
OH YES! I am not the only one to write Splinter as harsh and forbidding when it comes to LeoxKarai! AHAHAH! I was so excited when Splinter came upon them in the cell - it caught me off guard and I just LOVED it so much! YAY! This story is fantastic, I dunno why I never came across it before, but I'm so happy I found it now! Woo!
SleepingSeeker chapter 3 . 1/31
Oh this is so good. I'm loving your portrayal of Mikey. He is just perfect in this - and once again, Leo's innocence is PRICELESS! GAH!
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