Reviews for Elkins
bingos-gal chapter 8 . 5/16
A GREAT sequel!
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 8 . 3/18
Again you write your characters very well. And John wasn't OC this time. Dean emotions and actions are very believable and so were Elkins (even though I wanted to kick the crap out've him thi entire story). And your ability to continue to write an amazing plot astounds me.
Rae666 chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Hey - I really really want to read this story and your others because they sound brilliant and from what I've read they are good but agree with Vichan that they're hard to read in those large clumps and without quotation marks. I have a very short attention span so it's not your fault, lol.

Anyway - keep writing :D
chips03 chapter 8 . 6/16/2007
yea a sequel would be nice )
Winchester494 chapter 8 . 6/15/2007
good chapter like your story you should definately make a sequal good story update soon
Vichan chapter 7 . 6/7/2007
You need quotation marks for dialogue, and a little bit cleaner separation of the paragraphs. It makes it extremely hard to read.

Good plot, though!
bluesweetie1978 chapter 6 . 6/2/2007
hey this is a really good story