Reviews for Held Up
beatlesxlove chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I fell on the floor I was laughing so hard...this was AWESOME!
Ka3rmaBaby chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I love how Roger was the only one acting like a normal person would.

Roger raised his hand. "Um, for the record I'm a little scared right now too."

That made me lol.
TryDefyingGravity chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
LOL! Loved it :)
iee918 chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Thats hilarious!
Red-LipStick x3 chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
i have tears coming down my face. that was hilarious! Maureen coming running out with a plunger! lmfaoo omg i love you.
Birdhearted chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Lol, this was SO FUNNY! Benny as a robber. Oh my bird...
LeiaSedai and Umi-Chan chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I never saw that coming! Absolutely hysterical!
PascalIsMyBaby1025 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
this was such a funny story. I love how you had benny be the robber. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
deadxparrot chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
This was a cute story. I'm not sure that Benny would have to resort to robbery just because they wouldn't pay the rent. Still, this was funny.
The Pixess chapter 1 . 5/10/2007

"Oh my cow!"- HECK YES!

Benny is the- omigosh, I so love you! So much that I cannot form coherent sentences!

"So will you give me the rent?...never...maybe half?"

*dies in sheer adoration*
ILikeScarvesAndGuitars chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
That was freaking hilarious.

And I totally understand Collins and the getting shot thing,LMAO.

Great work.
x Rajah x chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
“Except Roger.” Joanne laughed.

Roger huffed. “He had a gun!”

“So how about we put this behind us, and you pay me rent so I don’t have to act this low?” Benny asked.

Everyone laughed.

“Uh never will we give you rent.” Roger said.

Benny pointed the gun towards him.

“Maybe half?” Roger said with is hands in the air.

THANK YOU FOR THE LAUGHS! Your humor writing is so great! I love it, you're probably one of the best humor RENT authors I've found!
jumpOVERtheMOON chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
HAHA. -favorited-
ManyHawks chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
ha. random
Chromaggia chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
omg, leave it to the bohemians to annoy a robber. "Can I put my hands down?" Yeah, I woulda done that too, my arms would HURT! And Collins wanting to get shot, hilarious, "How cool would I be?" And Benny's the robber. LOL! Tampons!

And a robber starting a trend. Wearing pink. omg lmho.
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