|Reviews for Kitchen Patrol|
| DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Hi, I don't know if you're still writing, but I just found this little number, and I had to let you know that I *adore* it.
Suddenly I'm in the mood for mac and cheese. :)
Sorry for such the late review, but this totally made me smile.
| superman chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
aw it so cute
| GGjunkie33 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Ah, very cute! I could totally see them having a food fight in my head, and then falling on the ground, faces inches apart! Good job, I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| irony882 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Such a generous amount of fluff you've created! Thank you!
Great, simple plot of a Mac 'n' Cheese fight. Would ya look at how that's changed their relationship?
Love the bickering, too. And the last line? Woohoo, you get 10 points!
| K8isGR8 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
that was so funny! too bad its only a one shot tho. you could definitely do a series of chapters like this. great job!
| BitterKitten chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Loved it! You really nailed the dialogue - it was snappy & witty. Loved Booth calling her babe, loved the line, "oh, it's on!".
Really nice stuff.
| 9ud9ir190ne6ad chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
great i loved it, he he
| azarathangel chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
AIE! hahahaha so good! glad to see you back here lol -me
| ameriker chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
OMG! this was SO awesome and SO hot! I loved it! If only it happened on the show!
| xoSnickersxo chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
I loved that! lol it was funny, cute, and amazing!
| Zucht chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
Excellent story, Tempo! I like the ending, although, she could argue that she had won -having him exactly where she wanted!
| Bailadora chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
Aww... that was SO SWEET!
| The Sidekicks chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
AW That was so cute!
| FireGirl09 chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
| Sarcastic102391 chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
just adorable i loved it