Reviews for Watching You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this is amazing |
![]() ![]() It’s ought to, not...’otta’ *gags* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im so sorry, I had read thump and laughed so hard cause I thought Light fell out of the bed |
![]() ![]() cool! it's amusing that Light is the last to know about the DN, to think that he used to have the most knowledge... hm, Ryuk's plan is gonna destroy Light's initial plan... and for that and other reasons, be hilarious. May i ask you for an update? i know the summary says 'discontinued', but the story is too interesting to go to waste... pretty pleease? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome!This sounds like what EXACTLY would happen if this happened! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story! I'd wish you'd update it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think you should continue this one i love it and i thought at first that ryuk loves light pity it is not the case it would be more exciting |
![]() ![]() ![]() wierd |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting good. Please Update soon! Its too good of a story line to be abandoned! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No IDEA what Ryuk plans to do by telling Light all that, but it's getting interesting. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. I have to say that my favorite line is at the end: "In fact, maybe if he went to sleep he'd wake up in the morning and this would all be a crazy dream brought on by too much time with his dear friend Ryuuzaki." Ha ha. On another note, I think that there could have been more insight into Light's thoughts when Ryuk reveals himself. Also, I think that Ryuk tended to gloss over things that, if Light had no memories of the events, would need a deeper explanation. Perhaps in the next chapter Ryuk and Light can have some kind of debate about being Kira. But seriously, this fic is getting really good. Now L and Light can both see/hear Ryuk, but they are both pretending not too... Not only that, but now Light knows that he is Kira but he does not have the same emotions towards the idea that he would have had if he had his actual memories... Ooh, does he even still want to be Kira? And what will L do if he finds out that Light knows? This is wonderful. I'm so excited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very very funny chapter. I hope to see more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent fic. I'm really loving it so far. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() BD i'm glad light can see ryuk now. thank you for updating and i can't wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() man I hate cliff hangers, but anyway awesome chapter the next one looks especially exciting |