Reviews for Oh, the fun fun!
Majors Darlin chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
please write more. pretty please. i love it so far & would be so happy if u would continue it.
anonymous chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
hey! this is a really great story! you should continue it so that i can read it more! haha. well continue on, then!
iluvjbfromtwilight chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
OMG

please write more of that stor fabulous writer

and u understand the bella and edward relainship

(sorry for bad spelling)

Emc
ljv chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Very Cute. How would this story continue?
bookworm-extraordinaire chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
You should make it a story! Its so cute and well-written!
DatingACullen chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Haha! I say that you keep writing it! It seems like it would end up being an awesome story!
xxblondee09xx chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
i love this it is totally adorable...i love your other stories too! but you need to keep going with this one!
isildur'sbane123 chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
do it. don't let this fabulous idea go to waste
Rogueunlimited chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
man that was short more plz!
ALittleTooAddicted chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
i luved it. it was cute. and i want to see what happens next! please write more? ...please?...

-ALTA
Nayame chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Cute little chapter - though I can't see the drama in there ;) (thanks for that. I like fluff )
B3lly chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
OHO I LOVE IT!

i really like it and can't wait for you to make this puppy a full blown story and all...hope fully i will be seeing an update...hehehehe

always tripping and fainting

isabella
whitetiger087yahoo.com chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
seein edward in a tankini...thats a sight to see... come on now u gotta write more PLEEZ!
MartaSwan chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
yeah u should write about all their day at the 's very nice...

baci

marta