Reviews for The Puppet House
nommykinz chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
well that didnt scare me :D (sarcasm)
Poshperson chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
Oh my god I haven't read this in a few years and i just reread all the chapters today and it still gives me the chills. This is so freaking scary! I started thinking of what i would do in Sakura's position and I think I would have gone crazy too. Did the three Marie's die? i think they were Sophia, Theresa, and Beatrice the sisters.
XxPinkPenguinxX chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
Omg...so good and horrifying at the same time...best stories eveeeeeer! (for me) wish it wouldn't end next chapter...But oh well..
Anna7045 chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
this story is simply amazing o.o

i can't wait for the next chapter .
la canelle chapter 4 . 12/13/2011
Update soon
RingoHime chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
plz update soon! DX
Gabriela chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
Pleeaassee tell me your working on the last chapter! Pleaasse pleaasee update! I wanna know how it ends! I reallyy realllyy wanna knowww! Update! Update! Cause this story is awweesomee! I just don't understand how people can make these storriiess it's brilljant! Your brilljant! Soo pleaassee update!

Ps: wow this review has alot of '!'

XxX Gabriela, your 13year old fan from Holland (yyeaahh...I just wannet you to know that...)

Pps: does everybody thinks dutch people are blond? Just soo you know...i'm not and man...i'm telling you alot...soo...well...hopefully see you in the next chapter
Gabriela chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
Pleeaassee tell me your working on the last chapter! Pleaasse pleaasee update! I wanna know how it ends! I reallyy realllyy wanna knowww! Update! Update! Cause this story is awweesomee! I just don't understand how people can make these storriiess it's brilljant! Your brilljant! Soo pleaassee update!

Ps: wow this review has alot of '!'

XxX Gabriela, your 13year old fan from Holland (yyeaahh...I just wannet you to know that...)

Pps: does everybody thinks dutch people are blond? Just soo you know...i'm not and man...i'm telling you alot...soo...well...hopefully see you in the next chapter
Kagome Monia and Akuma Neko chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
plz update it's been a year
LightsBright chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
WOAH! I wasn't expecting this fic to be that morbid! but... It's so addictive! I love it and its victorian appeal! XD Please update soon!
XxTenshixX chapter 4 . 7/26/2010
The BEST horror fic EVAH. Period. No argument.
Pinboo chapter 4 . 7/26/2010
Oh My God.

Seriously. Seriously.

I've actually stumbled upon this fic years ago and I actually already had every intention to read it, but for some unknown reason, I forgot to read it. Then, today, I stumbled upon this fic again and I decided that this time, I had to read it.

And Oh My God again...

Seriously, one of the BEST horror fanfiction I've ever read in fanfiction dot net. And I've been in ff dot net ever since 2001 and I have read plenty of fanfics. I am not a good critic, but if I read a good fanfic, I will certainly praise it. I'm going to do it now.

The beginning got me hooked immediately. I like how you created a realistic situation and slowly but cleverly dragged the plot from reality to another different world. Just like what Sakura has felt, I felt like the moment I read the part about her entering the castle, I felt like entering a whole new world. The atmosphere, the sensation, it really feels like a different, eerie, ethereal world there inside Sasori/Deidara's castle. So...good job in shifting the whole scenes.

The plot is exquisite beyond words. Again, not only that you have managed to pull the reader into a whole new atmosphere, but you also create a very hooking plot. I read the whole 4 chapters non-stop. If there's anything that makes me distracted is only the fangirl in me that needs to cry out of the loveliness of your fic.

Anyway, back to the review for the plot... well, naturally horror slash mystery slash suspense always keeps me in my seat. But even more than those other stories with similar genres, I really find this particular story engaging from the very beginning till the very end. I like the pace of the fanfic. It's a little bit slow in the beginning of each chapter, but something from the mid-to the end of each chapter always gives something exhilarating, something shocking, something that just paces up the story and thrills the reader. Now, although to me the pace of the story of the beginning of each chapter is a little slow, but I want you to know that I don't mind it at all. See, this is one of the goodness of the story. For story that has slow pace, I usually only read it quickly, just as long as I get the context of the paragraph. But with yours, I simply read word per word, even re-reading them again (not because your story isn't comprehensible, but simply because your choice of words and the flow of the story astounds me so that I just have to feel the sensation again).

Alright, I'm getting out of topic again. Still about the plot... hmm, I like the whole theme and how you conceal the secrets and twist of the story until the very end of the story. I love the 4th chapter the most. Especially since the revealed secret of Akatsuki. About the slaughter house plot...wow, it's good. It's not really surprising (as probably you've given us indication in the chapter's title and in the whole Sasori/Deidara's behaviors that indicate that there's gotta be something wrong about the manor), but I still find the way you plot it to be refreshing.

Now...characterizations.

Again, superb. I love how you make them in character but still charming. Sakura's attitude to me is realistic and I really don't find her annoying. I like the way she sees things, the way she thinks as a teenager (but a realistic and mature teenager, at that), the way she reacts towards things. I can feel her.

About the other characters...I believe that you capture the eerieness of the Akatsuki members well. Love the way you portray the smexy Itachi, love the way you create the disturbing Orochimaru. I also love how even the smallest appearance of your character is distinguishable. For example, Gaara, who probably only appeared for less than a paragraph, but yet, you still described him greatly. And if you can do that to character that only appeared in one paragraph, I suppose you already know the magic you do to the other characters you describe throughout the stories.

Still about characterization... now Deidara. I like how you make him the 'Prince' (a twisted Prince, at that. but a prince, nonetheless) and how he still shows the cute part (like when he hugs Sasori from behind). I love how...despite how 'holy' you made him, you still added elements of his peculiarity here and there.

As for Sasori...oh my. Oh my. I grow the upmost respect to Sasori's character here. Seriously. I feel like I can respect him. Your writing makes me feel like he truly is someone so that damn...superior. And I love the way you make him unpredictable, the mixture of his kindness-cruelty, the psychotic tendency that is buried inside him even though he always masked it with politeness and hospitality. Damn, smexy, smexy, Sasori. Thank you for making him so wonderful here.

The interactions of the characters are also what I find amusing. I like the friendship Sakura-Deidara formed, I like the deep impression Itachi and Orochimaru made through their meaningful acts towards Sakura. I love the funny, intriguing, amusing relationship of Sasori-Deidara. I especially love the way you portray Sakura's feeling and opinion about Sasori and Deidara.

I also love your intake about art and how you really put the artistic personality of Sasori/Deidara merged into the details of your story, for example, like when you're describing the decoration of the house, the dialogs they had with other characters...etcetera.

Your writing style overall is very pleasant. You don't always use the flowery, hard, complicated words, but your writing is far from being simple. I mean that as a compliment. What I'm trying to say is that this story doesn't need the coatings of difficult words or phrases or sentences to show its true, natural sophistication. Although on the other hand, i praise you for using the difficult words in the proper situation.

Okay, now for the fanservice you provides...haha. I don't mean 'fanservice' here in perverse context, rather I mean to say that you really are successful to make the fangirls who yearn for a good, intriguing, horror fanfic. Oh God, I wish there are more stories like this in ff dot net. Well, there are several other good attempts on horror, but like what I've stipulated before, your story is the best horror fanfic on this site (in my opinion), and if I can say, I will rank your story in the top 10 best stories I've EVER read in ff dot net.

I'm pleased with the fair use of DeiSakuSaso here. I love how it's not another boring quest of who will win Sakura's heart, but rather, this is the intriguing story where Sakura is the object of posession that they would gladly share. The way that Sasori and Deidara regard Sakura as 'art' is also very nice. I am usually a hopeless romantic, but actually I am glad you don't insert much romance here. But I love how you make the SakuDei interaction (and ItaSaku interaction)...sexy. Not too much, not too sweet, but still impressive and memorable. I wish you'll do the same with SasoSaku in the next chapter. I am a SasoSaku shipper myself actually. :)

You satisfy both my desire to read a good literature with the appropriate amount of loveliness for a Naruto fangirl like me.

It feels like watching movie. In other word, the flow of this story is so good that readers feel so captivated with the story. Personally, this is also the longest review I've ever given to any story. I think you deserve it. You've presented us 4 chapters of good works, this review is only the very least I can do to pay your kind favor.

Do not think that I sugarcoat anything, because I am really not lying of how I am mesmerized with this story. If I'm not, I won't bother writing a review this long. hehe -

Alright, now for the other similar request that I'm sure you're already bored to read...update soon please.

I noticed that you've once left this story on a pretty long hiatus, I hope that you won't do it again. As a writer, I understand that I don't have any right to force you to write faster or anything. But if I may have my tiniest hope as a reader, I just want you to know that I have faith in this story. I really think that this is a wonderful story that deserves to be continued, not only because it satisfy fangirls, but also because it is a piece of art itself. You really have talent.

Well, ending this review, I just want to say...Thank you. It's really been such a pleasure to read your work. It's such a relief that Naruto fandom still has you as a writer. I hope you don't quit here.

Well...thank you, thank you, thank you for the fic. Hope you update soon...!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
So the next chapter will seriously be in three years, or something else along those lines?

...shame. It's such a good fic, too.

Bah.
Hard-Knock-Life chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
Holy-freaking-crow...This story just sort of pulls you in.
arisu rin chapter 4 . 5/9/2010
pretty story. update already.
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