Reviews for If I Had You Here
In The Mix chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
That's so sad. Beautiful but sad. I adore it.
IOTR chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Update soon! Great story!
mandarin'peel chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
oh no T.T

that story was so devestatingly gorgeous

and the last lines make me want to cry T.T

i feel horrible for yuiko to have to see her friend like this.

and ritsuka...
penKittyChan chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Oh, my, this is excellent. I really mean that-one of the most original ideas I've seen in a long time. It's fabulous-very bittersweet.

I think it would be better if it was written in the past tense, though. But it's still really great.

Good job!
DarkInuHanyou chapter 1 . 5/15/2007

Update soon! It's good!
marapozsa chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
You'd think Yuiko might have tried something a bit more, but the way you portrayed her potential for maternal instincts is lovely. Congratulations to you for making such a lovely one-shot. It's a bit too short for my taste but I suppose elegance in simplicity can definitely make up for that. So can your flawless spelling and grammar.
Francesca Akira89 chapter 1 . 5/10/2007

Ma.. Ma... (but) Non sapremo mai cosa è successo a Ritsuka? Noo! Too bad! please, sequel sequel!
Sycocat chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Aww...that's so cute and sad. I wonder what happened to Soubi. (Don't cry, don't cry.) Ritsuka *needs* his soul-mate. That was great, nontheless.