|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/12/2016
ahhhhh the ending sucked, which saddens me because I had really enjoyed this story throughout all 11 chapters and then the last 3 were ruined :'( couldn't you just kept them to being friends, I mean friendship can be so strong, they don't need to go further than that :P
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/12/2016
ok I have been loving the plot and your writing and just generally the whole story up till this point, but seriously chuckie and tommy? ew ew ew, seriously wrong, I really hope that doesn't happen again and it seriously was because tommy was scared...but why do I get the feeling its not...
| LeeMona chapter 14 . 4/26/2016
California most definitely suits Dil, especially the type of personality he has. It really screams late 1960's hippie. This was a really good chapter. I'm glad Tommy and Chuckie FINALLY got together. Great job I LOVED THIS STORY ALL THE WAY THROUGH.
| LeeMona chapter 10 . 4/25/2016
This was a very calm before the storm type chapter for Chuckie and Tommy. It was intense and then at the end it was soft and affectionate. I really liked this chapter keep up the great work.
| LeeMona chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
This is so well thought out and it's really emotionally driven. That's what I look for in a story. If I'm not emotionally reeled in then I just drop the story and go elsewhere. But you...you managed to reel me in with you're great storytelling, phenomenal dialogue and story pace. I also love the innuendos between Tommy and Chuckie. Thank goodness you kept Tommy true to himself because he's such a flirt lol. I know I'm years behind on reviewing this story so don't burn me alive lol :D. This is a fabulous great work darling keep up the great work.
| Tren Rogue chapter 14 . 10/28/2015
Loved the story- went through the whole thing in a matter of hours. It was a little jumpy in places, but that's alright. Sometimes a story needs those little jumps to keep things moving.
Now, I know this is finished, and it's been several years since, but it doesn't really seem like it. Adding the part with Dil just opened up so many other possibilities.
| The Power Of Names chapter 14 . 8/17/2015
Ending it with Protective Dil was brilliant. An enjoyable story.
| The Power Of Names chapter 4 . 8/17/2015
I like his boss' attitude.
| Kokoa Kirkland chapter 14 . 7/8/2015
Well, Dil had a very very surprise
| lillymansfield chapter 14 . 2/4/2015
OMG BEST EVA! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! FROM BEGINNING TO THE END!
| lillymansfield chapter 4 . 2/3/2015
OMG I absolutely LOVE this! Its hard to keep me from squealing when its late at night reading this. I love it! I'm only in the beginning yet I'm so it to it from the first paragraph! Wow you're so awesome! I can't wait to stop rambling and continue reading. If you excuse me...
| Nico.Slade chapter 14 . 4/7/2014
That. Was. Awesome
Just the emotion alone
You sir or madam have an excellent story here
| Violet chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
Aww, poor workaholic Chuckie! I love the story! 3 Keep it up!
| yuugi arry chapter 14 . 4/13/2012
Humbult County suits Dil if he can find the Juggalos before the tweakers... I like this story and I honestly believe it brought my appetite back. I hope you write another Tommy/Chuckie story soon...
| supaherolena02 chapter 14 . 4/11/2012
luuuv it! write very often, hear me? DDD