| Reviews for Paraselenic |
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   Evelyn Lucia chapter 2 . 5/16/2007 Well, this is certainly interesting. How will Dumbledore react to his 'golden boy' now? |
| Tsurai Shi chapter 2 . 5/15/2007 (Must suppress the urge to burst into evil lautgher...Didn't work...) A clever story idea! I can see how Mistress Nika has influenced your work, just as she has mine. :) The overall sotry is fantastic, and I most especially love that last line. ;D Please do update this soon! -Tsurai |
| AlastrinaMeadow chapter 2 . 5/14/2007 I live Harry's antics! Update soon! |
| sellaisesta chapter 2 . 5/14/2007 mylläkkä upheaval, rumble, riot, confusion, tumult chaos kaaos disruption keskeytys, häiriö I'm assuming that this name 'mylläkkä' is Finnish. I'm a finn so I know what I'm saying. good story, I really like it :) twelve points from Finland! (sorry . The eurovisions are affecting me) |
| Lian Ryu chapter 2 . 5/14/2007 This is really quite an interesting turn. I have always read the Harry Potter books and thought, yes Dumbledore is a great wizard, but perhaps a little to great? The world acts as if he can do no wrong but it seems odd to me that this Great Wizard can only rely on a young, emotionally abused, UNtrainted, child to defeat a powerful Dark wizard. I like how you have made Harry take his future and taht of the wizarding world seriously. An alliance doesn't always mean dark things as long as it is in controlled moderation... |
| AlastrinaMeadow chapter 1 . 5/11/2007 Is the man a vampire? Update soon! |
| darkfaerie161 chapter 1 . 5/11/2007 Lovely, It may be a used story line but its great! I love how you started this and i love your little personal touches. Cant wait for more |
| yet-another-Gaara-fangirl chapter 1 . 5/10/2007 I have never read a story like this one (some elements but not together), so to me it is original... so I can't wait to see where you are going with it! I take it the guy talking to him is a vampire? I'm wondering what you will do with the vampirerace... it is never the same. wings, thrall, killing people, their society etc... and as for Dumbledore... the road to Hell is paved with good intentions... and because of this... I love anti-Dumbledore stories! :-P why is the story called Paraselenic? I see what it means but what does it have to do with the story? or will that appear later? good start! is this the first HP story you write? hope for more soon! |
| Adi Sagestar chapter 1 . 5/10/2007 I am reviewing just so you will update soon... I can think of nothing to say and my mind is a complete blank. It's good though. |