Reviews for When Forever Begins
Em Cullen chapter 4 . 6/4/2007
A war? NO! Not a war! I hope the werewolves die! They really annoy me!

Great chapter!
Em Cullen chapter 3 . 6/4/2007
GR! I bet Jacob spray painted that!

That's amazing with the whole treaty thing. I never really thought about it. I hope that comes up somehow in Eclipse!
Em Cullen chapter 2 . 6/4/2007
AW! That ended nicely!

I can't believe Jake would say that!

Great chapter! :)
Em Cullen chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
OH! I really like it!

Great chapter!
TwilightsVampyre chapter 3 . 6/3/2007
uh oh! i wonder who did it! jacob? probably. it sounds like something he'd do.

this story is really good so far! i love it! update soon!

oh...and im adding you on to my C2! yea its that good...
TwilightsVampyre chapter 2 . 6/3/2007
yay! she said yes! ::does little dance::

aww...poor jakie. i feel a little bad for him now...and now the feelings gone. yay! for bella and edward!

lol. "cullen land" thats so funny!

ps-woah...our pennames are kinda similar
TwilightsVampyre chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
oh snap! great first chapter! yay, proposal...boo, jacob interrupting.
Tokyo-Cherii-Princess chapter 3 . 6/3/2007
Very good. Kawaii proposal, but you need paragraph. It was very difficult to read! please put paragraph between different speakers and changes in acctions and points, please. It will haelp the reading a lot, but other than that...EXCELLENT!
ivorygore chapter 3 . 5/31/2007
That's awsome! haha. Write more please!

Go Team Edward! haha.

Moonlessnight
Tigerlillium chapter 4 . 5/25/2007
Please update soon! I like it.
namachachi chapter 4 . 5/24/2007
I loved it! I can't wait for Eclipse and for you to update!
XxMarie.Alice.Brendon.CullenxX chapter 4 . 5/20/2007
OMG! this is so cool please continue
colorsallaround chapter 4 . 5/20/2007
It's very good. :-) your doing very good with the story and i cant wait to reed the next chapter

-MLEC-

-please,read my stories-
dragonfly454 chapter 3 . 5/14/2007
i loved it!
jjust munchkin chapter 3 . 5/13/2007
thats a good quote D

from romeo && juliet
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