|Reviews for When Forever Begins|
| Bella Masen Cullen chapter 2 . 5/13/2007
I really like it so far! Just a tip though, each time a person talks, make it a new paragraph. It's reall yconfusing when everything is mushed together into one. I really like the story, though! Keep up teh good work!
| watch-me-hunt chapter 2 . 5/13/2007
cool plz update soon...the only thing i have to say is that you should space out the writing because the paragraphs are so bunched up
| ivorygore chapter 2 . 5/11/2007
OH! Sounds suspenseful! Good job TV17! PLease write more soon! I wanna know what happens! And make it quick! haha ;)
ps - I love you too! haha
| decompressionperiod chapter 2 . 5/11/2007
please, o please continue...quickly write the next chapter!
(sitting on the end of the chair eagerly waiting for you to type out the next chapter)
anyways...keep on writing your wonderful ideas! it'll be a big hit someday! )
| wretched witch chapter 2 . 5/11/2007
Sorry to Jacob fans, but I hate him. So I have no problem saying:"How dare he?" I think he's such a jerk. And why he don't want Bella to marry Edward? He don't know about his promis to change Bella when she marry him, do he? Please, update soon!
| jjust munchkin chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
i detest jacob..
cute proposal D
| oceaneyes85253 chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
aw, thats so good
| David4194 chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
bella rocks was already taken
very good you had better post the new chapter or of it soon ,nice place for a cliff hanger.
| Bella21vampiress chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
now that isnt fair you cant leave us hanging. lol