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AmbrosiaKolyaO'Connell chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Wow. In such a small amount of words, it manages to convey so much meaning and emotion to the audience. I love it! Well done (:
Miss Tony Stark chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
just perfect, I loved that scene too. You rock and so does this one-shot really loveley.
bookworm19065 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Interesting enough but you do realise you called him Malfoy in his own thoughts right? Shouldn't he be Draco in his thoughts?
Morghen chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
These is so emotional! I felt Draco's fear -it was crazy! You did such a great job describing how he was feeling. Great job!

bluestargem chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
This is quite powerful. And also very accurate. Draco's opinions of Myrtle were very IC and generally I think you got the hang of his personality very well. His reactions are very appropiate for someone so cocky and self-centred so you generally handled that very well. Another great piece, well done :)
HerTaintedQuill chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I like it. Draco's view about the task. I would think the same if I was him.
Schermionie chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Pretty powerful. Possibly one of the best fics I've read that takes place in this moment. I loved how you didn't make it a hurt/comfort thing with Myrtle and Draco, but the best part of this fic was how it seemed to follow the progression of Draco's thoughts, from one idea to another one - a sort of word association. Now /that/ is good.
theJilyandLamesFanatic chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Wow, that was really good.

I felt bad for Draco, which doesn't happen often.

Well done :)
The Fourth Black Sister chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Really good. Really good. That is all I can say. :D
HumanBeing235 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Your way of seeing thing was nice, the idea was nice, but I've seen better fics about this matter, though I don't think I can criticise much because I really can't write this kind of dramatic stuff, so...But it wasn't a bad piece either.
XxXxSlytherinPrincessxXxX chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
oh wow. that was actually pretty damn brilliant. and I'm an absolute sucker for emotional draco, so that was just even better.

i think if it was a little longer, with a tiny bit more description, a tear or two may have actually slipped out of my eye.

amazing work, loved it!


PropertyoftheHBP chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I liked this a lot. I think you portrayed really well how Draco must have been feeling - which is refreshing, as we don't really get to see that 'human' side of Draco much in the books. Well done! :)
DramioneLurver chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Oh my goodness.

I am struck speechless.

That was simply... beautiful. I adored that scene in the book (and was so glad to see that they did such a wonderful job with this bit in the film), and you truly did it justice. This was the most magnificent take I've ever read on this scene. Seriously, I love it. I adore it. You did a truly MAGNIFICENT job!
Sinistra Black chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
well that was rather short for a scene such as the one you picked. The ending is good, playing with the universal thought of all victims "why me" because it's true, Draco was a victimin this whole mess. I think it could have been better, with maybe more description on his emotions at all time but overall it was nicely done! keep it up
Gone Gone Very Gone chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Really good story!

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